really is too bad it died, was fun reading what was there

not updated in more than a year, and a year again before the previous update, most likely dropped

While this fiction is a fun read lots of it is disconnected and hard to follow, paragraphs suddenly end and another plot point is followed only for that plot to stop and another to start in a very jarring way. This has also not been updated in a year so in my opinion may as well be considered dropped.

I gotta ask, did he ever enable death? or is it technically on by default because he is in an "irl" situation

grammar desperately needs fixed, it completely ruins what could have been a great FF.

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This one is probably abandoned, hasn't been updated since 2017. Read through it either way and is quite good, if a bit confusing sometimes in explanations.

this one sounds like it could be entertaining but the horrid grammar is just a massive turn off.

Where in the world did this awful name then colon for people talking come from it wasn't done in the beginning. Honestly don't understand how people can read it, throws me off...

Yes, a better reference would be when they are talked about in avatar the last Airbender, they are all in the same locations and opened in similar ways, as well as meaning similar things.

This is of incredible quality for a fanfiction, would make the perfect starting book for a franchise and had a great point where I had read to and there was no more chapters left that it would have been absolutely perfect to end on and start a new book after. The character design is excellent and the interactions between characters is very well done.

I don't care if the Fic ends here one bit this is a great ending and. I think that this is where it should end, and a second book can be started but since webnovel is weird I think what comes after should be treated like a different book. this fic so far had all the ingredients to be exactly like a book series and it turned out great

awfully done. the Droid just told some ship designer out of complete nowhere that his son goes on dangerous adventures and is being hunted by assassins, not only that he uses the year 45bby like everyone else will know that 45 years after said event the battle of yavin will take place...... hmmmmm

honestly it is great to see a skyrin fanfiction that has proper grammar and has an intriguing story but the previous battle was just stupidly chaotic, why is ulfric Dragonborn instead of some random person? why if he was a transmigrator was he put in someone so powerful and made dragonborn? It makes sense that they wanted to capture Alduin but there was just so much happening that couldn't have without having future knowledge like the taming odahving.

1 stone for 3 meat and 3 stones for 1 special meat seems perfectly reasonable....

missed opportunity to call it dragonsreach

he has parasite immunity -_-

there are rules to the english language, some are not followed but there are others that make sentences jarring when reading. We are not texting each other and this is not some online message board. Use proper grammar please. The rule is thus follows: all numbers ten and below are written in word form, the exception is when writing something along the lines of 2*2 or 7*3.

Pretty much everything about this fic is great, the story, the characters, explanations can be a bit long but are full of useful information. The only complaint I have is that the grammar while not terrible isn't good either, though that's to be expected from a non-english native. Get someone that either english is their first language or they know it enough to teach others to check over your work for errors. To me grammar is the most important part of a story because if you have poor grammar it ruins the rest. Poor grammar tends to take you out of the story because to native English speakers it just doesn't sound right and is jarring, it jerks you right out of the imagination.

while I don't despise system novels I hate the ones that have missions that are unavoidable and give rewards for completion that come from the system, stores that just break all logic of the universe. Why can't a system just be simple and give hints to the mc in the form of missions that just hive them a direction to go in.