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First of, great imagination and blend of soo much. But the problem is that the the VRMO actually feels like a drag instead of interesting. It feels pretty forced and boring. Amazing ideas, hats off for that . Also for some reason the whole world seems very forced and artificial. I think that is because you tried too many things and don’t have experience in properly connecting all of it. The flow is kinda missing like how it was done in ROTWRTW(not on webnovel)

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The Two Lives Of Aaron Wade: The Gamer & The Heir

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Yeah I did try to incorporate a whole lot of things into the novel. I'm going to try to slow it down and focus on little bits and pieces. Thanks so much for reading