First of, great imagination and blend of soo much. But the problem is that the the VRMO actually feels like a drag instead of interesting. It feels pretty forced and boring. Amazing ideas, hats off for that . Also for some reason the whole world seems very forced and artificial. I think that is because you tried too many things and don’t have experience in properly connecting all of it. The flow is kinda missing like how it was done in ROTWRTW(not on webnovel)
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