Dragons, elves, pirates, and magic...in space! Follow Aaron as he travels through a game world to gain clues to his dead mother's past, clues that would open up a new world for him. All while trying to balance a child and a multibillion corporation left to him by a grandfather, who was more father than grandfather. A scheming family, an assassin old maid, and a possible romance, all lead to a wild ride as two very different lives clash to make up the life of Aaron Wade. Disclaimer: don't own the image, just got it off the internet. Also if there are any similarities to persons, living or dead, or to other forms of media, I'm in no way whatsoever connected to them, unless it's to my other novels. There would be mentions and similarities to other media works, I repeat this is a completely original work and I don't own them neither am i connected to them in anyway. Support Me on Patreon https://www.patreon.com/KelvinCoKing
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"Kingdoms may fall and fail, but I do not." In the virtual game Brave World, the heroes fought their wars and Kings hold their kingdom. Heroes, warriors, knight roamed the expansive vast land of Brave World. People praised the game to be realistic but is it really a game? As there is a secret in the real world that is hidden from the rest of the world, there is also secret in the virtual world. Enter Daniel. A young bright man who decided to enter the game to help his family and trying to make a living by playing game The story tells of his life, his tribulation, his failure and his triumph. It is in Brave World he began to shine. It is the story of his legend, and how he became known as the greatest strategist in Brave World. PS: I also wrote Age of Heroes, Song of Heroes and Lord Shadow.
An alien race invaded the Earth on June 6, 2128. At the midst of this war, many nations allied with the alien threat and the war nearly wiped out the rebelling humans of the planet. At the edge of mankind's survival, the United Nations Army launched its forces to eliminate the immediate stellar threats that loomed over Earth. General Seeker Carlean, commander and leader of the mission, risked and gave his life to destroy the immediate stellar threat. The battle was won though Earth lay in ruins. Perhaps mankind will live to see a few years of peace before the alien threat returns to wipe out their existence. At the immediate aftermath of the stellar battle, the fallen Seeker Carlean awakens and finds himself at aged 17, living the peaceful life he lived 16 years before he died. So begins a new game in the battle for humanity's survival. ---- Cover art by Jayps. http://www.behance.net/Jayps
In a world where power within a game is used to solve crises in a country. Find out what our players will do to survive in this world, where they care about their level and equipment. --------- The story begins when the young Liu Yang turns sixteen and has his initiation to start playing a game called Project: Unknown. Due to an accident while he completed a quest, Liu Yang got a mysterious chest, and after discovering that it belonged to a master of souls. Liu Yang embarks on the journey to becoming the next master of souls. Follow the adventures of Liu Yang as he talks and helps those who have died, but have not left this world. This is the tale about the one who has the power to see and talk to souls. This is The Tale of Souls. -------------------- Cover created by MikeWe - https://forum.webnovel.com/d/27252-free-covers-for-your-books --------------------
Nicholas Phire was sentenced to life in prison without any possibility of parole. Because of the mercy of a lonely prison guard, a new world is presented to him. Nix finds himself in the Virtual World of Colonial with a hundred-year assignment as Lifestyle player in the Gladis Hub. Will Nix stay in the remote village located on the polar Ice Cap? Or does adventure await for the man whose life was supposed to be over? For now, I am releasing daily chapters of 1500-2000 words. Follow us on discord! https://discord.gg/rhFtf6Y
Doomed to die! Facing such a fate, Ian Cloud, the crippled genius, has to make a choice… Either to wait for his impending death while decaying slowly, or to run into its embrace head-first for a chance to struggle and live on! Follow Ian as he enters the astonishing world of ‘The Lost Realm’, a super realistic VR game where danger lurks everywhere and getting logged out equals death. Will he manage to survive now that he is no longer restricted by his physical flaw? Or will he lose his last chance to fix his broken reality? - Discord of 'Omni-Mastery' : https://discord.gg/E7kYDhB - For further support: paypal.me/LightningAsura ko-fi.com/lightningasura
Shin Kinghad is a kid that had been abducted and trained by a powerful underworld organization since he was three years old. After six years, he had been rescued by the Special Forces during their operation against that organization and was adopted by the captain of the special force group. Since then, he treated the son and daughter of the captain as his own brother and sister. Years later, he joins the greatest VRMMORPG of all time, [Destiny's Fate] online, due to repeated invitations of his brother. He creates havoc inside the game as he climbs his way from being a beginner player to a peak class expert. But as he started to grow up, he became curious about his real identity and who his biological parents were. He tried to investigate it with the help of his brother and best friend. And after discovering his real background, he decided to follow his father’s footsteps and stood at the peak of the world using his Martial-Art Skills and Mentalism Techniques. Here is our the Discord Server: https://discord.gg/7cTvYR8 Disclaimer:The cover was made by a very good fried of mine if you want to see her work you can look at at: https://vacantart.weebly.com/ or contact her at: Lance.VA#1206
***3 CHAPTERS EVERY DAY 12:00 PM (MST-Arizona)*** "Bowzer, we'll stop here for the night." "But I can keep going!" Bowzer insisted. 'Don't we need to--" "Bowzer, we'll need our rest before we reach the Fissured Mountains. You've never been there, so I'll tell you about my past experiences there." "Hey, Jack, how come you've been everywhere but you're so low-leveled? Is it because you were an ancient hero before?" Bowzer tilted his head, anxious for an answer. "Yeah, that's why. I thought you knew that already?" "I do. But weren't you also really high-leveled back then? Why aren't you that high-leveled like before?" Jack pondered the question for a moment till he smiled. "I don't know." ----- As an avid player of the world's largest MMORPG, Jack was dubbed the "Achievement Junkie" by fellow players. After completing all possible achievements he earned an unlikely quest. The quest offered a chance to escape reality and, just as it said, Jack was pulled into another world the moment he accepted it. Now living in Kartonia, the world he had fallen in love with in-game, Jack must start from lv. 1 with a brand new class and subclass he had never seen before. And though his gamer knowledge is still useful, he quickly discovers that the current time in Kartonia is over 1000 years after anything he had witnessed in-game. Armed with what the locals call ancient knowledge, Jack must work to level up and uncover the secrets of the apocalyptic Godly War that he missed and keep it from happening again. It's a journey of a know-it-all solo gamer who discovers how to form relationships and is encouraged by his new system to form a party in order to grow. With Bowzer, his Hell-flame Fox companion, and so many more additions, Jack must grow to rival the two warring pantheons with the support of the neutral pantheon. Can he achieve such a feat?
The no. 1 player in VRMMORPG, Two Worlds, fall under the scheme of his lifelong enemy. From the top of the heaven he crashed to the bottom of the world. Being laughed at and with huge debt in his shoulder he try to get his revenge and conquer the game so no one will looked down on him anymore. With his best friend, can he conquer the game? ---------- Release rate: 7 chapters / week with a random bonus chapter release. (GMT +7) ----------
Arial is a soldier in the Human resistance against the Demonkind. After the destruction of the resistance he was given a chance to undo the past mistake. Join as Arial went back in time and prepare to save his family and the world of humans against the Demons. ************************************** Other synopsis Tales of great heroes that fight dragons and demons, stories of evil monster and cruel men and cunning woman, of great heroes fighting great wars, the stories of their noble life and tragic death stretched across the stars, a thousand, and a thousand more, and a thousand more, glimmers of their battles, of hope and love and their struggles How much stories, how many battles were fought, won or lost ? They call it the Age of Heroes
After an accident leaves pro-gamer Eric Lieu both mentally and physically scarred, he’s forced to leave the pro circuit and any chance he’d ever have at being the “best.” In real life, socially-awkward loners whose facial muscles only seem to recognize “surly frown” and “smug-ass smirk” as expressions don’t get to rule the world. But then eccentric genius Zhao Jianyu launches Viren’s Refuge, the first full-immersion VRMMORPG, and Eric decides to join this game of Gods and monsters to rise from the ashes even stronger than before. Citing his belief that “Games belong to the Gamers,” Zhao Jianyu refuses corporate investments and offers an unbelievable deal to hardcore gamers: Play for Shares! The first 10,000 players to buy the insanely expensive VR gear and game subscription will receive stock in Zhao Jianyu’s private company. Furthermore, once the initial 9 Mythic Realms of the game are defeated, the Final Player Rankings will determine who inherits the company. Zhao Jianyu does all he can to make the playing field equal against the corporations determined to exploit his game, but it will be up to the gamers themselves to prove that those who enjoy the game the most will always be the ultimate winners. With the help from a quirky cast of friends Eric definitely didn’t ask for (and can’t understand why they keep sticking around), Eric is determined to win the game for the gamers and help Zhao Jianyu realize his dream of a world safe for all types of people—even the loser loners. But with so many real-world stakes, will Eric be able to survive long enough to prove the true worth of a gamer?
Tags: Power Couple, Action, Adventure, Romance, R-18, Virtual Reality, Comedy, Secret Identity, Overpowered MC, Male Protagonist and Female Lead. The most feared Assassin in the world died because of vengeance. What he didn't expect was instead of being sent to the nether world, he instead woke up on his younger self all before the time he became an Assassin. Instead of going back to the life of living in the shadows. He instead decided to lead a new normal life this time and play the newly released Virtual Game, Fate Online! Let's watch as he change the things that isn't supposed to happen while changing his fate along with it and watch him, on the road to becoming a top professional player. Note: The Female Lead would have its own narration along in the story. [Artwork: ptitvinc] Release Update: 7 Chapters /week Want to add an addition to the story? Then check out my Patreon! https://www.patreon.com/apocalypseII P.S - If you're gonna leave a low end review. Make sure its a constructive criticism, because I would certainly get it deleted, if it doesn't help me in improving my story. I don't except hate reviews just to lower its rating because the story is premium. Discord - https://discord.gg/XPeAkE
***** Volume 1: Spaceship's Retrieval [ Completed ] Volume 2: Going Back to Space [ Completed ] Volume 3: Empire's Descent [ Ongoing ] ***** A planet that was not recorded in the database containing records of almost all human discoveries in thousands of years. This is where Wallace has to live and survive until he discover a way home. He was left with a damaged spaceship that can only be used as a shelter now. Equipped with his bio-armor, laser gun and other advanced technology equipment, he was confident that he can somehow survive in this world. But there is something here that is not existing in many galaxies that humans has conquered... magic. Unfortunately for him, before he could explore the new world that resembles Earth, he died. ******* Yes, the whole volume 1 was for the sake of retrieving the spaceship aside from world building, etc. There will be a lot of unanswered questions or missing information at the beginning but don't worry... everything is planned and will be revealed in later chapters. Also, the first half of the first volume was inspired by 6 or so animes and 4 other novels. Good luck finding them. Thanks for reading! *** Early chapters are being edited by sir Bouletcorp slowly. Bear with us. Discord Server: https://discord.gg/uqg5tt
January 2020 the world come to an end.. When the plague started it, it brought death upon 80% of the population. When the survivors thought there was no more hope. They came. 1008 pillars dropped from the sky and spread all around the world in more than 100 countries. The pillars became defensive bases to all of the survivors. But in the end.. after 10 years of struggle, The human race still lost. This is a story of Alex, given a second chance to start anew, one month before it all started. This time it will be different for his family, friend, and the human race. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx The Novel was created for a writing competition theme kingdom building. What will readers be expecting from this novel: *Realistic world background. *Real historical quotes *Sci-fi as close to real-world science *Slice of Life the tag will be #kingdom building #apocalypse #realworld #reincarnation If you interested of more visual, feel free to join Doomsday Pillar discord, https://discord.gg/4UxxdF9
When he returned to the World of Martial Arts, the game was filled with blood and battles! Chen Kaixin had chased after the footsteps of the one emperor, two empresses, three princes, seven dukes, and thirteen aces for three years, but during the eve of the Sword Among Us tournament in Mount Hua, he was ambushed by evil bastards, and was killed so much that his level dropped to that of a newbie. He completely lost the chance to join the ranks of the powerful players in the game! In great disappointment, Kaixin quit the game and got drunk so that he could forget his sadness, but during that stormy night, Chen Kaixin found that he had actually dreamed for a total of three years, because when he woke up again, he woke up to three years ago, when he was still a student.
It is the year 2050 of the Earth Calendar, and while many would think it to be an ordinary year, it is far from what one would expect. With the arrival of Rifts popping up all over the world, portals that came to be known as Ascenders Rifts, a new era is born. Though filled with endless possibilities, the world itself is on a path of destruction. Evan Cross, a warrior from the ruined future, struggles to fight against the inevitable fate of humanity. After failing to save the world two times, he is faced with the same choices yet again, but this time it might just be different. ===More of my works on Webnovel === Digitize - https://www.webnovel.com/book/17048424205270405/Digitize%3A-Rebirth-of-the-Silver-Death-God LevelUp Family - https://www.webnovel.com/book/17397607105687205 ===Release Details=== Daily release - 1 chapter (10:am - 12:am and 7:pm - 12:pm) (GMT-8) Timezone Mass release (Sundays)- Chapters Determined by Main Power Ranking 1 Extra Chapter (Top - 100) 2 Extra Chapter (Top - 50) 3 Extra Chapter (Top - 15) 4 Extra Chapters (Top - 5) Want to show some support? Drop by a Review and a Power Stone. You can also send me a Gift or Paypal Me :) https://www.paypal.me/shadowsfinger - My Discord Server: https://discord.gg/ffVV7cV - Want to read some more of my personal works? Check out below! https://www.patreon.com/ShadowsFinger https://www.amazon.com/dp/B07C7912KX - Follow me on Twitter & Facebook: Twitter -https://twitter.com/ShadowsFinger Facebook - https://www.facebook.com/ShadowsFingers/
WARNING! BOOK CONTAINS SEX/BRUTALITY/RAPE/KILLINGS/GORE/SUBTLE HAREM/ROMANTIC SUBPLOT IF YOU ARE OKAY WITH THE AFOREMENTIONED TAGS, THEN PROCEED WITH CAUTION! Other Ongoing Book: The Immortal's Wine * * * Friction between several big countries escalated in the year 2040 when the world almost ran out of natural resources. In the same year, a terrifying group of unknown individuals surfaced in the world. They numbered more than several hundred thousand, appearing literally out of thin air. To think that such a monstrous group had managed to hide away without anyone's knowledge was inconceivable. The group wreaked havoc in the world with their futuristic weapons. Laser guns, fighter robots, and other advanced weaponry were included in their arsenal. Billions of humans died in the war causing liters of blood to flow in the once flourishing world. The year 2050, Major General Cale Sylvann, a 49-year-old elite and one of the leading figures of Earth Alliance died in battle. "Where am I?" "Calee! Get up or you will be late for school again!" *** Message me on discord: Condemned#0294 Join my discord server to chat with me and other readers on this link: https://discord.gg/JJTF89
He was sent to a world where different races and beings wage different types of wars and fight for supremacy. With a body of a mere mortal, he learned the way of the immortal craft and a different cultivation technique. Making him able to roam the land searching for a place where he could belong. How can he survive in this dog eat dog world he knows not. But combining the ingenious designs of the modern world and immortal energy, otherworldly devastation awaits those who face, the geared immortal. ***Thanks to those who liked the novel. Your rate and comments are of great help.
"Log-On Tap." TAP Interface Acquired. Synchronizing character data..... Welcome Back Q, find your path! A secret Assassin class hidden deep, passed down to him from a mother who loathed his existence. An unrivaled fodder racing against time to save his childhood friend. An NPC uprising with Q leading the way. This has a lot of 'Life' aspects, a sizable portion of it takes place in the real world.
He doesn’t know why his mind has been transferred into that of a petty thief named Soran within the VRMMO . The new ‘Soran’ though possesses both the body’s previous occupant’s memories and his own. Using his experience as a Legendary Rogue who had reached the apex known as the Realm of Legends, he will now have to survive in this world which had once been a game to him. Soran will have to grow stronger while avoiding the upcoming dangers and protect his younger sister, Vivian, from the chaotic times which will soon devastate the world. He shall eliminate everything and everyone that threatens them, but perhaps Vivian might not need his protection? When the demons of the Abyss rise and the gods fall, a massacre will take place across the world. Divinity has fallen, and evil is surging from beneath. The Time of Troubles has begun.
** COMPLETED NOVEL ** Alternate name: Rioneed: The Rise Of a Necromancer. "A fallen hero will be a legend if he got a chance to live his life again." -Ibro. Ibro was the hero humanity waited for... a necromancer, but he was betrayed. In a world full of demons, monsters, and gods, humans were the weakest chain. Ibro was their hero, but he -alone- wasn't enough. After Ibro's defeat, he was judged to enter reincarnation to save himself and humanity. Without his memories, losing his powers, and being alone with no aide or friends, Ibro started his journey to rise again. At the low Earth realm, Ibro reincarnated 4 times in a row and failed. Now, he will start his 5th and last reincarnation chance. Follow Ibro in his epic journey to rise from ashes and reach the heavens.
In the aftermath of apocalyptic event, a man rises above the others to lead an era. With threat beyond the stars, as Supreme Beings of otherworldly watches over as Destiny and Fate work their way, an era of Gods descended upon Earth And in his rise, lies a terrifying secret. Read how he rises above it all, through all the complicated love life, his determination to push through his own fate and destiny and the Will that pushes him forward. With all of this, could the Fate that was written be overturned? And will he truly rise to the top and survive? A great battle for the fate of the Universe began. This is the story of Lord Shadow. PS: The SS stones is not determined by me. It is determined by how long the chapter is. I have taken steps to cut some of the chapters but there are some chapters that could not be cut as it would obstruct the story. And a chapter is usually ten thousand word each. I have taken steps to cut it and make it into part sized in the later part of the story because many were complaining and thought I was the one that determines the SS so I hope this answers your question. So....if you like long chapters and long story this is the story for you. Ciao. And hope you enjoy the story PS: I also wrote Age of Heroes, Song of Heroes and Age of Adventure
Nero Valstine was a Level 799 Master Rank Digitizer in his previous life, titled as the Silver Death God who was feared across a mysterious VR World. He had been on a special Digital Quest hinting towards the revelation of the final treasure sought by many, a treasure that can grant any of its wielders wildest dreams. Moments away from accomplishing this task, a famed figure appeared and ended his hopes, giving him a fatal blow before stealing the artifact. Nero, who died with regret, and endless rage was sent into the cycle of rebirth to start over anew, can he achieve his greatest wish and desires once more? Or does fate has other plans? "To those who seek the greatest of all power, travel these lands and explore its endless boundaries." "To those who desire wealth beyond your imagination, venture this earth to unravel its endless riches." "To those who seek the unknown and universe's greatest mysteries, enter this realm and your answers will be found..." "Whatever you desire, so long as you venture this world and find my treasure, then all your wishes will come true..." With this resonant cry across the heavens, thus was the start of the age of Digitzers. ===Important Note=== This story is apart of the Spirity Awards Contest, if you really like it and would love to see it win, please feel free to show your support by dropping by a review, comments and even power stones, I shall greatly appreciate it. ===Release Details=== Daily release - 1 or 2 chapters (9:am - 12:pm) Mass release (Sundays)- Chapters Determined by Main Power Ranking 1 Extra Chapter (Top - 100) 2 Extra Chapter (Top - 50) 3 Extra Chapter (Top - 15) 4 Extra Chapters (Top - 5) ===Subscribe to my Mailing List to get exclusive access to works==== https://www.subscribepage.com/shadowsfinger_copy ===More of my works on Webnovel === ARIFT - https://www.webnovel.com/book/16131271505970705 LevelUp Family - https://www.webnovel.com/book/17397607105687205 Want to show some support? Drop by a Review and a Power Stone. You can also send me a Gift or Paypal Me :) https://www.paypal.me/shadowsfinger Want to read some more of my personal works? Check out below! https://www.patreon.com/ShadowsFinger https://www.amazon.com/dp/B07C7912KX Follow me on Twitter & Facebook & Discord: Discord - https://discord.gg/ffVV7cV Twitter -https://twitter.com/ShadowsFinger Facebook - https://www.facebook.com/ShadowsFingers/
In Alfan the world where the (un)fortunate protagonist of this story finds himself, are there at any point in time 5 living gods, if one should die a new one is added to the mix, thought the history of Alfan there have been many living gods in the world appearing as hero's, king's and queen's, master chef's, tyrants, or as completely unknown people. join Mars as he sets out on a journey to explore Alfan to find out what kind of living god he wants to be. as soon as he gets there that is. chapters are more then 1500~ words. Authors discord: https://discord.gg/uHVhX9m
Ark is a young Swedish boy. Growing up without the loving care of parents had a big impact on his life and his personality turned out rather cold, even though he is a good person. His life ends abruptly when he suddenly dies of a rare disease, but his story doesn't. In fact, he gets reincarnated in a world of swords and magic... as a wolf? Follow Ark as he tries his hardest to evolve and survive in this new world fraught with danger, after all, power is everything. If you want to help a brother out: ko-fi.com/tyronebedoire I have a discord as well if anyone wants to join, but its nothing special. Link: https://discord.gg/trDVGJ4
The Final Haven Kingdom. The last known habitable place for humans. Protected by it's faithful Knights, it's walls were destroyed and rebuilt over and over again, signifying it's strength and unwillingness to bow down before the forces of evil. Raven, a young man who's soul returned back in time with his memories intact, what are the changes that he will bring to prevent the kingdom's destruction? Join his adventures along with his family, friends and his lover to find out what is his own Way of being a Knight. *** Disclaimers: 1.) One chapter everyday, might change depending on the ratings and/or personal reasons. We'll see. 2.) English isn't my native language, there's bound to be some errors here and there. You have been warned. Enjoy.
Draco had risen to the top of the world through his exploits in the legendary FIVR game, Boundless. After years of intense conflicts between his guild, Hellscape and the guild of his former infidel lover, Darkrow, things came to a head when Draco conquered all. Now, nothing stood in his way of total conquest within the highly acclaimed second world of mankind, as he intended to fortify his new empire. Unfortunately, a timely assassination sent him back into the wheel of time for reincarnation, but not even the Gods gave him peace of death. Thrust into the past, Draco realized he'd been given a second chance at life to start from scratch, with all the knowledge of over fifteen years of almost absolute power in Boundless. Now, his path to glory will be far shorter and filled with more bloodshed than Hades could handle. -------------------------- Discord: https://discord.gg/RBSdRcD Ko-fi: https://ko-fi.com/kotario -------------------------- WARNING: If you're the type to be triggered easily, please do not read.
Reincarnation? The act in which a soul transverses ethereal limits and finds itself once again experiencing its past events; a second chance. However, that wasn’t the case for a young soul. Unlike the typical reincarnation, the matters related to the individual known as Kaiden Smith and his soul was complicated. After wallowing in despair and finally experiencing his death, he was blessed with the opportunity to return to the past. Only, the way he returned and what he returned to wasn’t what he knew. Mysterious events that he wasn’t previously privy to were happening. As a result, he walked a different path. One where his rise was unstoppable. The reversal of his fate marked the beginning of the events that would once again mark the Return of the Divines. Entering the new VRMMO which in his past experiences was the world’s leading VRMMO; he looked to dominate the game. However, it soon dawned on him that this game he was playing now was entirely different at its core from what he played before. The journey to unraveling his destiny and capturing his fate began. ------------------------------------------------------------------ Book's Discord: https://discord.gg/p6jxn7b Author Ko-Fi: https://ko-fi.com/syphiinz (Buy me a Coffee, thank you!) ------------------------------------------------------------------- Disclaimer: This is my first ever written novel, therefore please bear with me here. Please! Also, this novel includes Mature Language as well as EXPLICIT sexual content. Therefore, 18+ is absolutely advised. P.S I ran out of tags, but this novel possesses juicy drama also.
As an international mercenary, Feng Luo entered a technologically advanced parallel world during a mission. After living several years in the new world, an online sci-fi game called War became popular across the entire Star Federation. Desert Eagles, Barrett, AK-47, Apache, RPG... One after another, familiar gears awakened his memories of the past! Terminator, Zerg, Resident Evil, the Force,... The missions that appeared after a system update made him even more suspicious and shocked! As such, Feng Luo entered War and became a sniper.
In the year 2077, the first FIVR Game or Fully Immersive Virtual Reality Game, Pandemonium, has been created. Pandemonium which is the first ever fully immersive virtual reality game made in human history. In the universe of Pandemonium, Fantasy meets science and where order is chaos and chaos is order. A universe of endless possibilities in which anyone can become the invincible hero fighting against the forces of darkness or a sage which dives into the abyss of magic and so much more. In Pandemonium, the inhabitants comes in all shapes and sizes. Adrian, our main character, who experienced an accident that caused him to be temporary limp used the game as a way for therapy but mainly to experience the new world of virtual reality. He will experience countless adventures and challenges and rise to be the most influential person in this new reality. Join our Protagonist on his new adventure to become the strongest. P.S. I do not own the cover page so if the original owner wants me to take it down, I will gladly do so just say it kindly. Thank you
In less than a minute, the world that we knew had changed. A mass vertigo occurred and for a brief moment, everyone fell unconscious. When people woke up, they learnt that their bodies were strengthened and that they also gained unique skills for themselves. Zombies and mutated monsters began to rampage on the streets. Jun was a casual thug. When he woke up, he gained an extra ability that will help him survive in this new world. Join him as he journeyed through this apocalyptic wasteland in search of his remaining family. Watch him build his own underground empire and make a haven for his own. NOTE: This is a slow-pace novel.
Being born from a rich family, Pedro Armaz was often scolded by his family because of playing VR games. Years after playing the VR game sensation "Bearth Online", He was “betrayed” by his guild members. This depressed him, which later on caused his death. To his surprise, he woke up and learned that he time-traveled 7 years back to the past! With his past experiences as an advantage, Pedro is determined to dominate the brutal and unusual game, Bearth Online, and become the strongest player in the world! ____________________________________________ After Several Months of Busy days, I finally got free times once again. And so, I would be asking kindly for your support in my return! I would like to give everyone a heads up, this story was made and posted as the raw and first draft. There might be some inconsistencies but rest assured that the author is doing his best in editing/revising these mistakes. Regards, RDream. :D ____________________________________________
Manato Tsukasa is one of the top tier players of the game, Alternate World. However, before he managed to reach the top, he originated from the bottom and experienced different sorts of humiliation and downsides. Instead of being down and depressed, he used those events as motivation to rise up, resulting in becoming one of the strongest Magic Knight player. Also, due to the game, he found the love of his life. When he was about to get married to the woman he is engaged with, he discovered that he was one of the few targets to be assassinated and she was tasked to do so. Without knowing who did it, he furiously escape. After desperately escaping death, he encountered a similar person in the alley, bloodied and out of breath. Manato recognized this person to be the creator of the game, Alternate World. The creator then handed him out an item that will return him to his past self, hoping that he will be the one who can change their destiny. He was also entrusted to travel back in time with a peculiar data that can only be accessed back in the past since he is already dying. Desperate to survive, he grabbed the item and decided to return. He woke up once again, in his 17-year-old body where the game is still launching. In his hands, is the weapon entrusted by the creator that has been transported with him? With his photographic memory and the data in his past, he won't just go down easily now that he had returned to the past. Instead of choosing the Magic Knight class, he instead choose the class that most players have to struggle with using. However, after doing a few things different from the past timeline, he found out that the past is now rewritten slowly as he messed up the events that should unfold, making a new future. Questions and mysteries slowly arises as he pieced together everything he knew. And what is the secret behind the game? Is it really a game or something more? ------------------------------------------------
Well from what I have read this novel keeps you in the dark most of the time. And I swear the Mc has multiple personalities from the way he acts. He mercies an opponent in an arena and in the exact next paragraph he says that that he will not give mercy as it’s a death game, and again after he says that he tells the opponent to give up. The way the author implements humour is excruciating, he would be threatening someone and the next second he’s getting smacked in the head like a comedy skit. The story progresses pretty fast and the world building lacks considerably compared to it creating situations where a person would be introduced as the relative of your arch enemy, but we don’t know who that arch enemy is. The switch in moods makes it so readers have a hard time imagining the mood and frankly it irritates me. We are not even given the technology level of the world and what we have to do is put bits and pieces together to make up one. there are too many times things just don’t add up, and in the end contradicts eachother.
Anone is a new writer, with fantastic stories built from an endless imagination. While he still struggles a bit with syntax while writing, it can normally be overlooked in the excitement of reading the story. Aaron Wade finds himself immersed into a dual world, one where he has to overcome family drama and claw his way to the top of a multibillion dollar company. Partnered with a fantastical line of side characters, from the strong willed love interest, the unfazeable and crazy bodyguard grandma, to the cute and lovable three-year-old son, he goes up against a despicable father who is willing to stoop to the lowest of the low to undermine all of Aaron's goals. In the other world, he has to build his in-game character up despite one unfair situation after another. The in-game world is exciting, well thought out, and draws the reader in, until they (at least I was) can't wait to see what happens next. Aaron is set up to be a very in depth character, in a well thought out world, trying to accomplish the impossible in two very different worlds. I've read to chapter 13, and I am not disappointed! I will definitely be reading more!
I normally LOVE criticizing novels! Hell, there was a time I was criticized for being too harsh to the authors due to my critiques! But hell if I don't love this story … A BEAUTIFUL execution of a new premise in a story, no overused reincarnation/transmigration/back-in-time or anything of the sort. A child inheriting his grandfather's empire while having to fight for his rights with his other family members (father, mother, brothers) be it in real life or in a VR game. I normally write reviews either due to disappointment (unfortunately, on this site, this is the most prevalent review one can expect from) or potential of the story (normally due to writing quality being really bad, but its premise being way too great to ignore). Guess what, this story falls under NEITHER. It's got AWESOME characters, world background and story development (at least for now) and stability of updates seems to be on a daily release (again, for now). Writing quality is also really nice; it has nicely split paragraphs and very good sentences' structures. Rich enough vocabulary and grammar is pretty nice. The only critique the author still has to work on (for now) is proper tenses usage. He messes them up from time to time, but it is NOWHERE NEAR the mix-up most other novels on this site have. Unfortunately, due to me being me, that still warrants one less star on `Writing Quality`, making it a total of 4. Other than that? It's 5 star for now! Making the overall rating a 4.8. Cheers.
This novel is definitely going to be op. Like just the background itself was amazing. And then the MC is obviously a little erratic but still intelligent. He might have went to the army or marines I believe so it shows he’s hard at work. But you can tell he’s charismatic and not your regular Mc who is very arrogant and gets angry because someone just and I quote “slap their face”. And his character build is clearly crazy op but everybody has the chance to makes their character built like that and not just Mc. Can’t wait to see where this novel goes.
• Writing quality ? 3* There’s room for development. The writing looks too superficial and not deep at all. I can’t seem the be hooked by the story. The writing style is more descriptive than narrative. • Story development ? 3* A good directive line but with lot of inadequacies, doesn’t feel like how people normally react and behave in those described contexts and situations. A lot of surprising developments but the bad kind of surprises, or maybe very badly written. We don’t feel a sense of flow. The events feels rushed and not finished, we pass from one to another without a sense of cohesiveness. • Character Design ? 1* The author want so badly the MC to be calculative, smart, funny or intelligent. But it’s gross, disgusting and totally the opposite. There’s no consistency in his personality and so his actions. Sometime he’s dumb or smart, calculative or emotional. We expect here one reaction but it’s totally the opposite. I don’t understand this MC, I can’t identify myself in him. I’m not that dumb and incoherent as a person. • World Background ? 3* There’s so much potential in that world background but the author completely messed it. He don’t seems to use that potential. The quality of story messed up the background. I want to know more about that world but not how the author brings it to us. Overall, a big disappointment. It could have gone so much better. I don’t know the author, his experience and age. But it looks very very immature. Sorry 😐
The background of game is not very well defined and is progressing too fast compared to real world which is way better . Also comparing MC and saying things that I'm not same like other novels characters or movie characters again and again makes annoying just remove that its not like i won't refuse like novel mc or rich boy bla bla things
Exceptional story, decent story building, though leaves much to imagination for now. An awesome story with a good amount of action and plot even though its tempo can be a a little mixed at times ( too fast, or just slow enough to feel frozen sometimes). Not gonna say too much as the story hasn't ended yet but this is a must read for those who want a good story without a template to follow like most novels out now.
The story is exquisite, adding in more detail over time while making large changes at the drop of a hat. It is a extremely fast pace book where the characters ter could experience a roller coaster of highs and lows within the same chapter while keeping a steady flow keeping the story on the proper path. It is an adventure for the maniacal as well as the romantic. Though just a warning it can get gruesome quite often.
Having read a sample of chapters, it's safe to conclude that this story tries too hard to do too many things at the same time. Here's some of the gamut of tropes that the author tried to squeeze into his story: 1. Having an unknown love child 2. Conveniently having said love child's mother dead 3. Having a new "stepmother" for said love child. 4. Introducing vr elements as a major component of the story 5. Introducing corporate politics. 6. Introducing crime/mafia elements into this story. 7. Trying to include humorous elements. I could go on and on. My advice for the author is that while it's great that you're inspired by various ideas, it's more important for a newbie ******* writer to write his first story with as small a scope as possible. Frankly, even bestselling authors like Butcher will struggle and fail at incorporating all the elements in this story. I mean VR plus corporate politics plus crime/mafia? This could be three standalone novels rather than just one. This is without mentioning the terrible prose/dialogue and cardboard characters. I see that the author has written about 200 chapters of this dross. My advice is to take this current story as a learning project and start over with a brand new idea.