Altansarnai
I always like simple romantic story you know like CEO man and normal girl type story... This one is exactly like that... I like the FL very much...Her confident and how she started to help people from the very beginning of the story like a really FLđ€... The ML is also nice and cool... Over all the story is going well and fresh.. Great job my dear author... U r doing a great job...
I love descriptive creative writing, in this story its more detailed descriptive it helps you understand every detail it's like watching a movie. The plot setting and Pace of the story is perfect, I am not a romance fan, but this book particular made me want to page to the next chapter, a box of Chocolates and lean back its like watching Netflix in word, Well done author I personally thank you for sharing your brilliant work.
Upon reading your story, I came to notice and probably you noticed as well that our writing styles are actually similar. Though since I am not much of a fan of this genre, I do know a good read when I see it. So my review will be tailored to the structure of the story. The pacing is rather good,but the main detriment is the dreaded "I" infliction. We can tell that it is First POV, but it would be useful to use more tools other than just having it say, "I" ever other short paragraph. There are just a few missed punctuation that I noticed, but nothing too major here. The structure of this book is actually pretty good. Though the characters are detailed and distinguishable too. I should point that out as well. Though the start is a bit jarring in my opinion, but it isn't too detrimental to the flow of the story.