Review Detail of Zhoa_Fei in The Tale Of Our Love

Upon reading your story, I came to notice and probably you noticed as well that our writing styles are actually similar. Though since I am not much of a fan of this genre, I do know a good read when I see it. So my review will be tailored to the structure of the story. The pacing is rather good,but the main detriment is the dreaded "I" infliction. We can tell that it is First POV, but it would be useful to use more tools other than just having it say, "I" ever other short paragraph. There are just a few missed punctuation that I noticed, but nothing too major here. The structure of this book is actually pretty good. Though the characters are detailed and distinguishable too. I should point that out as well. Though the start is a bit jarring in my opinion, but it isn't too detrimental to the flow of the story.