Wonder Fist
This is one of those novels where just a few chapters are way to much. MC has way more plot armor than usual, with a big touch of the I am awesome, watch me slap someone's face sickness. Power levels are arbitrary bullshit and don't matter at all to the MC which makes any accomplishments of others totally meaningless. Background characters as well as the administration must be mostly schizophrenic because they change their attitude and motivations so fast it gives me whiplash. MC has the intelligence of a freight truck barreling ahead without any breaks. I have rarely seen a more undeserving MC gain power, but even then the system is way to op. In essence the MC has to follow basic orders to gain infinite power and when I say basic I mean walk there, dig here, open this cupboard etc. This is so bad I don't even want to think about it anymore.
It's not good.... The ranking of power levels or cultivation don't really matter for the MC, at the beginning we are told he has the lowest magic power level in the academy but after getting a single spell all of a sudden he insta cast like 9 spells in quick succession. It doesn't make sense, none of it does...
The story is fun to read and waste time but the the Mc has more Plot armor than Naruto and that says a lot! The translation is decent, there are some mistakes here and there. ALSO CHAPTER 14 IS BROKEN! I HAVE RESTARTED THE APP, LOGGED OUT AND BACK IN BUT IT WILL NOT LOAD NO MATTER WHAT. ALL THE OTHER CHAPTERS WORK FINE BUT CHAPTER 14 WILL NOT LOAD WHATSOEVER!
I am giving the story alow score because there are not many chapter. I will change it, later. So the character is your typical mc that gets transmigrated, nothing special, wish we would see more of his old life. The world is still in the process of being built. It will also take time for the characters to mature, I hope that there is a twist with the mc(maybe he will be the bad guy)
interesting idea the mc has to hunt chests to get his golden finger but there is a wee bit of a problem with this story split up into three issues. Issue one the chests are split into grades which i believe are bronze, silver, gold, crystal, and like three more after that which i cant remember. now the issue for this is that there is no actual distinction between say bronze and gold for example since all the chests just seem to give out some good stuff and the one crystal chest we saw seemed to be fairly lackluster in my opinion. My second issue with this story is that we are getting mary sue'd in the most obvious way possible, our mc was fight against an earth mage and the mc's fire was pretty much useless (blegh another fire mage) so the system pops up with a bronze chest IN THE MIDDLE OF THE ARENA!!!! and gives the mc the earth disintegration spell (see what i mean about the chest grades not meaning anything?) which he then uses to win the fight. When the next time our mary sue is going to lose a fight the system suddenly pulls out a emergancy mission to defeat the opponite and gives out a temp spell to win with but my question is this....... WHEN THE HECK DID MISSIONS GET ADDED TO THE SYSTEM??????? My final issue is more of a pet peeve then anything but we came to this story thinking about an op mage, so what annoys me about this is that the mc doesnt even cast spells instead the system does "there are no fire mana particals in this are so I cant cast fire magic. Wrong i will just have my system somehow manifest fire oarticals so i can use my spells." or "im a fire mae so i have horrible control over the fire particals. WRONG the system will perfectly control the particals no matter the situation." In total we have an mc who is supposed to be confusing because he keeps going to random places but instead looks like a disrespectful idiot, and the system who is the real MVP along with also being the real mage