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I only have one word for this novel, one word only. Are you curious about my one word too? Why so curious? Stop reading to find out my one word man. Omg, please stop being so curious. Curiosity will kill the cat, don't you know this. Fine, seeing how you're so desperate to know my one word. It's collection. What's collection? Obviously, it's adding this novel to your library fool.
Nothing is perfect to be honest, but I shall give an almost perfect score of 4.6. Still, I don't know why, but this story is like that book that you can't release although you want to. Still, I want more of this book since four chapters aren't enough. Writing quality is good, I give it four stars since there are some words that don't flow really well. Stability of updates are good. Character design is too early and world background as well. Still, it was a good read. Looking for more. Added this to the library.
A W E S T U C K, this is very descriptive, the prologue is well formatted but the scenes are very visual! thus the warning which is great, the cover doesn't do justice to the book or the authors skills though! CHANGE IT THATS THE ONLY PROBLEM I HAVEEEE! apart from that, looking forward to newer chappiesss! ill stay tuned.
Yay, tea, I reviewed for no other reason but to review. It's good, have ore faith in yourself and you'll be fine. Also, you know I speak the absolute truth so you don't have to worry that this is me cheering you up, if I wanted to do that we'd be listening to anthems rn or watching RA. Bye, I hope you have a great time writing.
Really enjoyable opening with some great world building and interesting characters. The main trio are fun to spend time with, with some great interactions and banter. The villain is introduced well in the first chapter with a real ruthless streak and a clear goal in mind. i look forward to seeing this characters come together in future installments. A few small typos are littered throughout, but not enough to lessen the quality of the prose or the overall enjoyment of this piece. Great stuff so far. I will keep my eye on this one as it develops.