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The Origin of the Cosmos

Story about Primal Chaos first Origin Primal System. 1. It has sub systems like Tribe, Clan, Sect, Kingdom, Bloodline system, etc First few chapters are very fast and confusing filled with grammatical mistakes hopefully it will improve. 2. I will try to make romance less generic as possible and will add a bit of modern romance environments. 3. Sorry for story's power scale being unbalanced right now but by end of vol 1, I will balance it out to make future power scale unbalanced again. 4. Interactions is a bit problematic because of confusion in first, third person, and narration. 5. Its has harem, romance, etc it will later have more on martial art comprehension. 6. Sorry but cultivation upgrade will always be fast. 7. Will try to add humour. 8. I am writing this as I want to write a story of my imagination as I felt many things are left out in the novels I read. 9. And please join discord and give ideas and help me writing the story things you want to add. 10. My last updated chapter will always be incomplete and it will be completed when next chapter will get uploaded. 11. Criticism are always welcomed but please do it with while pointing my mistakes out exactly so that I can correct myself. Adventures to the peak of existence He who is revered as LOrd of aweSomeness. I am a science student writing literature so please give me forgive my mistakes, support and give ideas on my discord. discord; https://discord.gg/EnsFuvm

omegasensei · Fantasy
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Suddenly whole world shaked purple thunder in the sky roared a warm light covered him washing out his every essence of he has and drained it out and another light keep instilling in his mind,soul,body everything changing his whole body 1 week later did the transformation finished.

"Congratulations host "Nasir" for successfully completely transformed System rewards host "The Origin Arts, The Origin Soul Arts, The Origin Roots, The Origin Physique,The Origin Bloodline".

"Congratulations host due to host's cultivation loss System rewards host Professions- Unlocks

Alchemy, blacksmith, Rune, Talisman,Cook, Warrior and Mage System to Heaven Supreme Grade.

"Congratulations host Cultivation gets upgraded by 1 large realm"

"Host please check your stats please"

Host: Nasir

Host Professions- Alchemy, blacksmith, Rune, Talisman, Warrior and Mage System (Heaven Supreme Grade).

Cultivation Base: Body-Qi Refining I layer.

Cultivation technique: The Origin Arts.

Martial arts: Thunder Steps,Blazing Flame Sword Arts,Star Finger(Heaven grade).

Bloodline: The Origin Bloodline

Physique: The Origin Physique

Martial Spirit: The Origin Spirit

Spiritual Roots: The Origin Roots

Equipment : Gold Dragon Full Body Armour(Heaven grade)

"F*** all stats has totally transformed to god level...?" said Nasir shocked cannot help but swear although he was a top grade genius before but now he is too heaven defying.

"Host Chaos will be not available for 1 day hope you will keep working hard because the world is going to be changing soon" system said with fading voice.

It seems system is exhausted from giving the inheritance of "The Origin".

"What does it mean.. what's going to happen?" Nasir thought to himself.

"Oh shit I have to return home 2 years has passed Emepror's punishment has finished" said Nasir eyes getting moist thinking of his parents and his lovely wife.

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