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The Origin of the Cosmos

Story about Primal Chaos first Origin Primal System. 1. It has sub systems like Tribe, Clan, Sect, Kingdom, Bloodline system, etc First few chapters are very fast and confusing filled with grammatical mistakes hopefully it will improve. 2. I will try to make romance less generic as possible and will add a bit of modern romance environments. 3. Sorry for story's power scale being unbalanced right now but by end of vol 1, I will balance it out to make future power scale unbalanced again. 4. Interactions is a bit problematic because of confusion in first, third person, and narration. 5. Its has harem, romance, etc it will later have more on martial art comprehension. 6. Sorry but cultivation upgrade will always be fast. 7. Will try to add humour. 8. I am writing this as I want to write a story of my imagination as I felt many things are left out in the novels I read. 9. And please join discord and give ideas and help me writing the story things you want to add. 10. My last updated chapter will always be incomplete and it will be completed when next chapter will get uploaded. 11. Criticism are always welcomed but please do it with while pointing my mistakes out exactly so that I can correct myself. Adventures to the peak of existence He who is revered as LOrd of aweSomeness. I am a science student writing literature so please give me forgive my mistakes, support and give ideas on my discord. discord; https://discord.gg/EnsFuvm

omegasensei · Fantasy
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32 Chs

The Origin?

"ahh ah this pain killing me.. ah ouff" Nasir the protagonist is in pain for three days now. This pain he is feeling can't be described by words, from his body to the very core of soul is being tormented. He is confused of what's happened why is this happening where is he??? all this suddenly stopped his body and soul gave out a sudden light sensation as he passed out.

He don't know after how long he woke up he heard a series of "ding" sounds in his head from the system.

"Congratulations to host 'Nasir' for awakenening the Strongest Origin Primal System "The Origin". This system is the treasure spirit born from "The Origin" to choose it's inheritor, and I am it's spirit call me Chaos.

"Who are you, where am I and most importantly who am I?....." Nasir asked painfully as he sat down on a rock.

"Host your name is Nasir and currently the inheritor of "The Origin", you were a scientist back on earth who had interest on how all of this started how the existence of relevance, everyone knows came to existence. One day you found a fragment of treasure box which was from far cosmos on moon, after you took back to earth, you researched it for 50 years even after so long research you found nothing, after a series of setbacks you still didn't gave up, then one day came when you found a clue"

"Host you discovered a secret that mortal or even a highest god can't learn, so as a result thunder struck you and you died but the secret gave you undying soul, as you managed to understand a profound word and which also allowed you to fuse the treasure with your soul and so the system reincarnated you to a another universe, as of this day you turn 18 years old the system is awakened"

After hearing the system he understood why he was in so pain and also understood the strange dream like vague memories he had before are his past life memories.

"So what now?"he asked

"The system will help you what you earned your whole life-purpose of existence, truth of cosmos and also inherit the "The Origin" to return to all's origin, the singularity but it will take uncountable Eras"

Just as he trying to understand his situation a soft message rang out in his mind, he could see a window pop up before him, as some kind of panel of information could be seen scattered across the screen.

Host: Nasir

Cultivation Base: Spirit Origin IX Realm

Cultivation technique:The Thunder Flame Dragon Incarnation (Emperor grade)

Martial arts:Thunder Steps,Blazing Flame Sword Arts, Star Finger (Heaven grade)

Bloodline:Thunder and Fire Dragon Bloodline (Emperor grade)

Physique:Saint Dragon Physique (Saint grade)

Martial Spirit:Thunder Fire Dragon (Emperor grade)

Spiritual Roots:Thunder,Fire,Gold,Wind(Saint grade)

Equipment :Gold Dragon Full Body Armour(Heaven grade)

"Host's information collected found host's missing talent required to inherit "The Origin", system concludes Host's attributes needs change, host's cultivation will be lost, asks Host's permission to continue"

"In whole Huang Empire my talent will rank from 1st to 2nd but it's seems the inheritance too powerful.... System... Chaos! will I not be helpless if my cultivation is lost?!"

"Host's no need to worry system will keep you safe during the transformation process and also host you will become more powerful and also achieve longevity compared to right now, host martial spirit, roots, meridian and dantian will achieve Origin grade"

"Okay Chaos start the transformation" Nasir decided to leave the rest to faith and the System.

"Officially Starting Strongest Origin Primal System beep ding ding"

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