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The Origin of the Cosmos

Story about Primal Chaos first Origin Primal System. 1. It has sub systems like Tribe, Clan, Sect, Kingdom, Bloodline system, etc First few chapters are very fast and confusing filled with grammatical mistakes hopefully it will improve. 2. I will try to make romance less generic as possible and will add a bit of modern romance environments. 3. Sorry for story's power scale being unbalanced right now but by end of vol 1, I will balance it out to make future power scale unbalanced again. 4. Interactions is a bit problematic because of confusion in first, third person, and narration. 5. Its has harem, romance, etc it will later have more on martial art comprehension. 6. Sorry but cultivation upgrade will always be fast. 7. Will try to add humour. 8. I am writing this as I want to write a story of my imagination as I felt many things are left out in the novels I read. 9. And please join discord and give ideas and help me writing the story things you want to add. 10. My last updated chapter will always be incomplete and it will be completed when next chapter will get uploaded. 11. Criticism are always welcomed but please do it with while pointing my mistakes out exactly so that I can correct myself. Adventures to the peak of existence He who is revered as LOrd of aweSomeness. I am a science student writing literature so please give me forgive my mistakes, support and give ideas on my discord. discord; https://discord.gg/EnsFuvm

omegasensei · Fantasy
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32 Chs

Confrontation

Nasir sitting and waiting for Emperor's envoy.

After a sudden sound a man appeared.

The man looked like he was in early 30's.

Nasir long before sensed him he got up smilled and said "Long time no see uncle"

The man whom Nasir called his name is Andrew.

Andrew was a little surprised and then smilled and said "How are you Nasir have you been well?"

Nasir said "Well you know alone here is no fun but since my punishment is finished we should get going"

Andrew laughed and said "It's seems you are eager to meet your parents,sister and wife"

Nasir was bit embarrassed scratched his head because his this previous self here was always cold and less speaker.

Andrew while laughing said "Lets go!"

They suddenly sudden vanished from the forest and appeared before a heavenly beautiful palace written "Thunder Fire Dragon War Palace" the city name also is especially same. His father is Lord of 4/12th cities in the planet he has titled of war god named "Fire Thunder War God".

Nasir was bit frozen remembering about the Situations that led to him being punished by "The Emperor".

The Emperor is the Sole ruler of the planet "Chaos desolate" Shi Dong and powerhouse of Ascension 9th layer. Nasir father is one of the Nine Great War God of the Empire powerhouse of Ascension 9th layer, a genius who age is only 40. There are only 6 war gods while other War god's realm are only in Ascension 3rd layer and in this planet there are mostly only Ancestors level powerhouse who are of Soul-Body Intregation Realm. Only Emperor has four ancestors who are the beings who have cultivated to Saint King realms.

"Chaos Desolate" is one of the top mortal planets. It has 9 cultivation Realms:- Elemental Realm, Body-Qi Refining Realm, Spirit Origin Realm, Foundation Establishment Realm, Golden Core Realm, Nascent Soul Realm, Soul-Body Integration Realm, Ascension/Nihility Realm, Crossing Tribulation.

From the beautiful palace a beautiful lady came out she looked like a fairy. Her name is Jasmine she's the daughter of Water War God's and wife of Nasir.

Jasmine eyes were a little soft she quickly appeared in front of Nasir and said "Welcome how have you been."

Finally they meet after 2 years.

Hey, guys please join discord for correction and give me some new ideas. And spare me for my grammatical mistakes.

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