Reviews of The Origin (MultiVerse Fanfic)
The Origin (MultiVerse Fanfic)
ProfessorNoob
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what i can say is...well done dude i like ur story and plot and some twisted event especially rito and saruyama. What i can say, beside good job and hope u can post more chapter and hope after to love ru u go to the other world which more action i guess i mean like shonen world like naruto or one piece since a lot of pokemon there...hahahahaha BTW good job and i hope more chapter to come cioa
really enjoy the story so far. only issue is that its been almost 9 months since the last update and there is no word on if its been dropped/ put on hiatus. either more needs to be made or an update on the status of the fanfic needs to be made. too many good fanfics have been left in purgatory and i dont want this to be one of them
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