Review Detail of jonathan_galael in The Origin (MultiVerse Fanfic)

what i can say is...well done dude i like ur story and plot and some twisted event especially rito and saruyama. What i can say, beside good job and hope u can post more chapter and hope after to love ru u go to the other world which more action i guess i mean like shonen world like naruto or one piece since a lot of pokemon there...hahahahaha BTW good job and i hope more chapter to come cioa