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when are you planning to update this story

why not all of them?? but seriosly if you only want 3 girls for the harem i would have lillie as the third, but if you can manage to i would also like to see mallow and serena added as well for a grand total of 5

when are you going to continue this story. its pretty good so far but it needs to be continued or deleted otherwise its just annoying.

based on some of your comments on the Pokémon story your writing regarding who among the pokegirls would be with that mc( because you did say the rest would be going to Nao(mc of this story), I'm hoping that your preparing it for an eventual crossover, but don't forget about the future vision that Nao had regarding the Pokémon world if you do because that will have a conflict in the harems unless something is changed between the two regarding Cynthia. overall cant wait for you to return to this story once the other one is at an acceptable point to wait for the potential crossover or is finished. Overall its been a nice story to read

one of the authors notes (late dxd/ early arifureta) said he was NOT going to add ANY Chinese cultivation novels into the story. that means NO ATG, tales of demons and gods, battle though the heavens or any others like that. I will say it would be interesting to see how they would be integrated into the story but it would only really be to make a massive increase in the harem and/or for the final bosses of those novels (ATG god kings, TDAG supreme sage etc.) to be the only real threat to him and his girls while there and would have no purpose otherwise

if the author is still alive please update or say that your dropping the story

please dont drop this story its only the second story that ive found for dxd that uses one of the background/lesser villan characters instead of isse or an oc and i want to see how you can make it work, esspecially with riser. you have already done a great start and i feel like you can make this into one of the top dxd fanfics if you keep writing this storyonly reason its not 5 star is because of how long its been since the last chapter

i still feel like it should be done as- IS first for the technology and most if not all the main girls then if nothing better either-1)DxD either replacing issei or (for lack of a better terminology) cucking issei/winning the love of koneko, kuroka, irina, kuno(fox yokai princess),and/or asia at the very least or 2) arifureta with him getting yue and the other girls that were encountered instead of hajime. maybe you could do danmachi and/or hundred after those two and beyond that i dont have any particular order or care for the rest of the suggestions

IS first for the technology and most if not all the main girls then if nothing better either DxD either replacing issei or (for lack of a better terminology) cucking/winning the love of koneko, kuroka, irina, kuno(fox yokai princess),and/or asia or maybe arifureta with him getting yue and the other girls that were encountered instead of hajime

enjoyable so far but really hope the author doesn't drop this without saying something because its happened to far to many fanfics[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]

really enjoy the story so far. only issue is that its been almost 9 months since the last update and there is no word on if its been dropped/ put on hiatus. either more needs to be made or an update on the status of the fanfic needs to be made. too many good fanfics have been left in purgatory and i dont want this to be one of them

would love to give it a better rating but its only got 15 chapter and its now been over 1 year without any word on whether the author has given upon/ dropped the story so i cant give it a good review. if there was more or the author stated the status of the novel it would be better