VirtuelGentleman
Just an avid reader who reads quite a lot. God forbid authors who drop excellent stories.
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VirtuelGentleman24dPosted*This is my personal view on the development of the story.* It started out so good! it had me instantly recommending the story to a friend, as I loved the whole short Arc of him being a Trooper, but from there I must say it sped up quite a bit, him turning into a padawan right after the first war/scuffle. which, for me, left much to be desired. As I had hoped for him to take the captain/commander role for a while longer as a Trooper. But again, this is just my personal view, the story is good and well fleshed out, so do check it out as it has plenty unique points.
- VirtuelGentleman1mthCommentedIn the center of the room, under bright purple lights, sat a girl with two extremely exaggerated long braids. She was sitting cross-legged, her head lowered as it swayed to the music, expressing joy in every direction.
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Eh?? why does the story keep saying heâs only been gone for 4 years while 7 years has passed by, what.
Yes, a seventeen-year-old girl is leading a group of elderly gentlemen. However, no one dares to say otherwise because Powder has an abundance of innovative ideas in weapon crafting, making her a prodigious talent in this field, even surpassing Ekko in weapon crafting. Her talents even amaze Singed, a biochemist. - VirtuelGentleman1mthCommented"I promise," he declared.
- VirtuelGentleman1mthCommentedProud.jpg!
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Its weird yeah, but lets just say its a special stat and the ALL from before meant ALL basic stats đ€·đŒââïž
Psi: 0 (???) - VirtuelGentleman1mthCommented
Hm? his name was Elminster Frederick Fawley before? was it not?
She offered a warm smile and replied, "You have great potential, Fredrick Elminster Fawley. Use your magic wisely, and it will serve you well. I am still awed how, as a youngling, you are able to cast without a wand. The stars still haven't decided your future, but it doesn't seem darkness for now, even though you are using poison, shadows, and curses in your magic." - VirtuelGentleman1mthCommented
Can you pick one El or Elmi đ
While the Fawley Estate may not have rivaled the grandeur of some of the most influential families' holdings, it possessed a quiet, understated charm that spoke to the family's history and values. Within its walls, there were many portraits of their predecessors. The one that Elmi hated the most was Hector Fawley, not because of anything serious but because of his annoying nature. The man was the most famous member of our family and was the Minister for Magic from 1925 to 1939, and he wouldn't allow you to forget it whenever Elmi walked past his portrait if he didn't salute him as the minister. He would berate El. - VirtuelGentleman1mthCommented
I would have left this instance if that was a thing. I really hope he will not do it in the future.
His own orgasm continued to build up as he watched how powerless the 5th-year prefect was under him. He let go of her hair as he probed her lips with his thumb, her mouth opened without any resistance and she simply started sucking on his thumb. For a moment Rigel regretted not picking the Naruto world, even though he knew that he had selected the right choice, the fact that there was a jutsu like the shadow clone that would allow him to spitroast a girl was a definite loss. - VirtuelGentleman1mthCommented
DEX would have made more sense tho
[REF- 14/20{Race Limit}] - VirtuelGentleman1mthCommented
Political marriage ? more like a power up marriage ! đŠ
For every wife added host will receive a random technique from the Saiyan's original universe on the first day of marriage. Limit of five techniques. - VirtuelGentleman1mthCommentedAGE: 27
- VirtuelGentleman1mthReplied to Level1GoblinRight after I gave the okay, A young woman with auburn hair and a white costume covered in stars appeared in front of me. I wasn't fooled for even a second. Before she could speak, I talked first. "Speak, tell me why you wanted an audience?"
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wdym they will be the only people to know? when they roll the credits everyone will know, unless you tell them to put the name Prince Aeric instead. lol
I also couldn't just be Aeric, because that was on par with 'Mclovin'. Nobody has just a first name and that's it in civilized society. So my name was now Saiyan Aeric on paper. My first name being Saiyan, my last being Aeric. It wasn't a great name, but the only people that would know of this would be the people hiring me. - VirtuelGentleman1mthCommentedAside from that, the only other semi interesting thing that happened was that my clone had a run in with the Joker who had somehow escaped while my clone was dealing with Harley Quinn. Harley was now in one of the prison cells back home.Â
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How would they know where your castle is when they cant see it?
They would repair things that needed repaired, clean up litter, save animals, take care of plant life, and help walk the elderly across the street. I had also made a second announcement to let people know they could hire these robots for construction and other similar jobs if they came by my castle and applied to rent them out. - VirtuelGentleman1mthCommented
What kind of halloween party is this.
For Matteo, I made his costume look like the Slasher from Scream, I saw no reason to alter it's original look. I even added the iconic scream phone call voice to the costume. His Hero name would be 'Scream' Similar to his brother 'Whisper'. I planned to train him in blade arts, stealth, and escape. - VirtuelGentleman1mthCommented
This is the closest I could get to what I imagine the MC could look like, as its now a mix between Vegeta and Gohan because of the hair growth potion.
Pictures - VirtuelGentleman1mthCommentedđ¶âȘđ”I've been watchin' you for some time
- VirtuelGentleman1mthCommentedMy hair had grown out quite a lot since I had taken the hair potion. I looked more like Gohan than I did Vegeta now. Looking at the current state of my skin, I remembered the perfect skin potion I had seen when I had first looked at the systems shop. Looking at the description it was vague, but it promised a permanent perfect skin. I bought it for 10,000 right away.