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The One My Heart Seeks

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ANOTHER SHAMELESS REVIEW. I AM ALREADY RELEASING THE REVISED EDITION OF THE NOVEL SO THE CURRENT CHAPTER WAS DELETED THANK YOU AND PLEASE DO READ MY NOVEL. JUST A SHAMELESS PROMOTION HEHE

imagineTishaD
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Josev_Quadra
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Nice story! In fact it's very well-made. However, I would like to know more about the characters development. This novel is very addicting to read due to the intense development. Good work!

TaintedMetal
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Vidit_Verma
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The novel has a good plot and is promising . The writer is successful in appealing to the readers . At last the novel is overall good and will desperately wait for the next chapters to come . Really enjoyed it

_midnightsunshine_
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I suggest you read till Chapter 6 at least! Such a captivating story. I was so shook and I couldn’t stop reading. The story is a little too fast paced and I wish author didn’t skip the character developments of the good characters. Otherwise it’s such a good read! I’m adding it to my library...please update!

MissReeed
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Aryna_Stan
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Oops! I just remembered that I haven't reviewed your book, silly me and I'm your biggest fan so now back to the book. Seeking you is simply awesome, the angst gives me goosebumps and the sad scenes make me want to cry. When a book touches you that deeply you know that you've bumped into a really good book with a really talented Author. Good work darling❤️❤️

sunakodwallflower
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meixiaolian
meixiaolianLv2meixiaolian

I like the way you write it, its simple and easy to understand. I won't spoil much for the readers. I like augustine, i also ship augustine and the MC. Keep writing :)))

RD_Hughes
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There is a great concept to this book. The author understands the feelings of pain and is able to portray that through very relatable characters, and their interactions. The plot is machine gun listed at you, at a blistering speed and I would like the author to slow down and really describe what is going on, instead of just telling the reader. This makes the big plot moments, that are good, seem very sudden and pass just as quickly. PROs: - Great Characters - A very good concept in the story - Very relatable interactions between characters CONs: - Pace is too fast, and misses details. Suggestions: - Better structure of sentences. Especially dialogue - Show the scene more than tell the scene. - Don't use HAHA

Dawn_in_dark
Dawn_in_darkLv4Dawn_in_dark

This is very nice and interesting novel. I really appreciate the efforts of author. It's story development and character designs are very good. I liked it. keep it up dear author👍👍

Seulil2061
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The Book is really good. The more I read the more I got interest. The story description the character discription everything is good. I'm looking forward to read next Chapters 😊

Kookie_Gee
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I really love the whole concept going on here and I love the characters and how the family was described, the different scenes but I hope author writes more of scenes that connect the main parts as in writing a little context between any two main incidents in the book! I absolutely love the plot and how the author leaves cliffhangers! It is a really nice story although there were a little tenses mistakes in the dialogues! I totally recommend this book! Good work author keep up the good work!

shaznalye06
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So I found some grammar errors but the book was readable and very captivating I was intrigued at the moment I started reading. Love the way you express ones emotion through a set of beautiful words. Can't wait for your next upload!

ZOA
ZOALv11ZOA

The story description and synopsis is just awesome. The story plot really hooked. I think you can write quite well so keep on writing and update soon....

nixrsr
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this story is very interesting! it really got me hooked from the very first chapter! and im looking forward for more chapter because its really a great book!

AGirlHasNoName20
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This is such a rollercoaster of emotions that, as a reader, I couldn't help but be completely immersed in this novel. While I do think there's room for improvement in the description between the dialogue lines (in order to make the story flow better), I'd say you nailed the emotions of the characters. It was amazing going on that journey with Xavier and reading as so much bad stuff happened to him. I loved this story and I can't wait to read the next chapter! Good luck with this!

Sabin_Subedi_Fei
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I am amazed by the story progression. This story really touches your heart through every line the author has written in every single chapter. Though I read only seven chapters I was deeply attracted by this story.