The Mob is not a Hero

Great book but you could separate that things they said and make things more clearer but overall great book and can't wait for more chapters

Writing quality sub-par Still not updated after 4 month Story development is mostly smooth. I have to say character design 6/10 Not much of the world background is written. But still, this novel has great prospects if written carefully. Add more dialogue between characters, It feels like I am reading the report to the point. More dialogue will add humor to the story. A good novel has good humor, and a good writer has great comedy.

I have read many interesting novels, but this is the first time writing one, I have no experience in writing so please try continue to read,the reason I am writing the novel I liked TNE, The Academy’s Deceased Ate It All, lastly Author POV I liked academy life of main character in all this novel, while reading these novel many thoughts popped up, I am just trying to put my thoughts into a book,in feature my thoughts can run wildly please endure. If there is any corrections please mention on comments. thankyou my updates will be regular from next week