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Overall I’d say it’s solid. I’m not too big on how slow it takes to develop and the characters kinda make me raise an eyebrow brow from time to time but this is still a nice little story that did not go where I thought it would go. The hook is what did it for me, kudos to the author for managing to swerve me.
I couldnt make it past the writing. I had somewhat high hopes from all the positive reviews but its almost unreadable with the constant grammatical and spelling errors. I read only the first 3 chapters but in those three there is also very little information about the characters and what the situation is.
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