Let's start by saying that I love writing and reading equal and I'm looking to improve on my writing and looking for anyone who would read my book and give me good advice on how to be better.
this story pulled on all my heart strings overwhelming me with emotions that I had to stop reading at one point to catch my breath. I felt every pain tried hard not to cry every tears.
I might have shot him... not by mistake... then regret
Damn, this is intense. was my first thought when I read the first line of the opening chapter. I know I saw the title of the book but I needed expect that. day dreaming... Really amazing story seeing from a man point of view. It didn't take much for the author to capture your attention with the first chapter and not because it was hot. From the beginning the author kept you guessing and because you're curious you kept reading and reading if you read this story you'll never sstop.
Needs alot of work but overall the story is progressing and slowly developing. some character's thoughts are a little jumbled. Needs proofreading and the structure is a little rocky. But it's a great story so far... thank you for sharing
really plays on your emotions.i don't know if she escaped from horror to a greater horror. it's really really captivating story. keep writing I love it thank you for sharing and I recommend to other readers to get engaged into this story you won't be disappointed.
😭how could you write such a heartbreaking story. The girl is so naive and they just took advantage of her. I thought whatever is name is will be her light and happy ever after but he turns into a monster and hits her the same I wish I was her friend so I could at least tear the husband apart. Apart from all the suffering that she's going through it's a great story because no matter how it made me cry I kept reading. thank you for sharing
please read. this story is truly amazing with vampires and witches and dragons. I've always loved reading fantasy and here I am getting my full in this book. it's really amazing and I'll ask you to read and recommend to crazy fantasy readers like yourself.
This is the type of book that'll make you read until you forget yourself and the outside world and dive into the world of characters. Everything about the story is great and it as an amazing storyline different from all other romance story and I really really like it. thank you for sharing
🤯There's no doubt out here or there to say that this is mastery of a well written book when it as been delivered so eloquently. From the beginning to the end you left me speechless sinking into every word because I think everyone in there life has thought of such action as felt such feelings it might not be everyday or every minute or every hour but in a spilt second when you're sailing on a rough sea because there is nothing as such as a perfect life because every human been feel love that can lead to pain whether physical or emotionally.
just when it's getting interesting. Anyway, at first I thought it was going to be a story about a serial killer of the sort, maybe vampire I don't know and no I didn't read the synopsis or anything I didn't even look at the genre I just like to dive right in. The story is well written even though it's not finish and I can't wait for more updates to find out what's going to happen next. and if your planning to read this book you should because the author wrote a masterpiece.
Mystery and more mystery it just keeps piling up and Felix wasn't the only one curious about her past I'm too and I'm curious about Felix past too. The author did a good job on this story from the begining and there was never a dull moment. you know some book you read it halfway and stop because you suddenly lost interest in the book but not this book so please read this book when you have alot of free time on hand because you'll just read and read and forget that you were actually doing something because you just can't stop reading. keeps you on edge and I want to thank the author for sharing such a wonderful story
im just going to say that I think the person after her is her father who else thinks that
my chest was tight reading this story and still now after finish reading it I can't let go off of the feeling. This story was not written but painted. it felt like I was watching a movie. I felt what the characters felt had me here rubbing my chest. So deep... words can't even describe how amazing this book is. It's a masterpiece and still this word is an understatement of how well written this book is and I could go on and on about it but you have to find out for yourself and I really recommend this book to you and you can recommend it to others because this book deserve to get notice. [img=update][img=coins][img=exp][img=recommend]
I felt this because she you said 'but sometimes this nature die when your in pain ..' and that's so true
I'm just going to be honest here. This book needs alot of editing and proofreading. Work on your sentence structure and grammar and you'll have a great book working with because you have an amazing story line and the characters are very good. To anyone reading my review don't be discouraged by the sentence structure or grammar because it's a great story to read.
that's just not nice how would you feel after being bullied by your crush and embarrassed... no no I think she doesn't need any of those jerks in her life. period.