EliasEinzwerth
PLEASE UPDATE SOMETIME SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I just want to give this story a 5 star It is cliche, but if u gave this story a low rate because of that reason than its more cliche than anything i mean u know everyone have their own taste like me i like the good mc and my brother he loves the rutheless mc And if u dont like the cliche story than i have an example In my country there's so many rutheless mc story, so many that until to the point that rutheless mc story get called a cliche and a mainstream story The point is you can't give an execuse 'its cliche the mc is so kind and always help people' to some story that u want to give a low rating.
well from where to start, for me the story not yet reach where i can judge it entirely so i'm gonna say that fro starter is quite good and hope u can make more interesting. Additionally about our mc well how to say is quite a king person yeah lol..and please i know this is gonna be an OP MC so hope and more hope u can make good story out of it...since the mc is OP send to the most ******** world such as Toriko world to fight 8 king or something or HxH to fight meruem... Suggestion : he has fucking 1 billion point dude...just buy him instant mastery already
Grand order faction .Please have him summon Heracles, paracelcus and Medea. By the way can't he learn other magecraft like primeval rune, kaballah , alchemy , astromany and elemental magecraft and spiritual evocation. Besides there's high speed divine words , warding, enchanting that he can learn and master due to akashic records book and fourth true magic. By the way he will have illusionism at ex rank due to fourth true magic.
The Character designs surely need some work. I find characters stuttering via texts and very unnatural reactions. The narration was decent, but surely it can improve as it seems like somehow it wasn't explained clearly. Characters suddenly knowing everything like that was very uncalled for, their reactions don't add up. As for the plot itself, it wasn't exactly my cup of tea, but that'll be my own preference and I won't state it hereHere, Update stability is well... obviously since it's on a break so 3.
Даю 5 ★ за то что круто!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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