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Review Detail of Door_kun in The King's Dimensional Chat Group (In Hiatus)

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The Character designs surely need some work. I find characters stuttering via texts and very unnatural reactions. The narration was decent, but surely it can improve as it seems like somehow it wasn't explained clearly. Characters suddenly knowing everything like that was very uncalled for, their reactions don't add up. As for the plot itself, it wasn't exactly my cup of tea, but that'll be my own preference and I won't state it hereHere, Update stability is well... obviously since it's on a break so 3.

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The King's Dimensional Chat Group (In Hiatus)

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