Hello, how are you?, it has been years since I first read this fic, and I must say that I do not get tired of Re reading it. Simply a work to enjoy again and again like wine, today 2023 finish reading it again and let me say thank you, thank you for doing this work as far as you could. It is one of the best works that and read, unfortunately it was not officially completed as it should be but thank you thank you and thank you very much.

Brother you have a pretty good concept, do not leave this lying and try to be more recurrent with the chapters so hooked and one does not forget this work. [img=update]

You need an urgent partner, and the hand does not quiet you

And here 1 year later, it just leaves a bad reading taste and you would get lost with the Pov

Thanks for the chapter, a hug 🤗

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This good cap, it would be good to have a relationship his girls are more partners and partners than someone with whom to share real love

Go at your own pace pa, It is a good literary work 👍🏻🔥

Hmm como lo explico, primero sería bueno que subiera capítulos un poco mas seguido no se pero subes los caps después de 20 días y así, segundo la historia deberías hacer que Hades visite el tártaro para que consuma diversas almas y se haga mas fuerte luego que viaje a otros panteones de visita y seria bueno que el foco principal de la historia sea DXD

I like the theme of the world but hmm I feel that you should add a challenge, a war or something that puts the mc in trouble, give it something that puts it against the ropes and evolves on the fly. But otherwise this Super this project. [img=recommend][img=update]

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It's a well-done ff the truth, you introduce systems of other verses into this one so that they can flow without damaging the story, but Ashborn you made him very apathetic, he's Human give him a little feelings and his power scale intervened too much in everything, he looks like a manhwa character haha But in general my criticism is towards the development of the character there is no love or anything of that are well the fights and everything but no mames leads a whole existence fighting, give it more romanticism.

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This good story continues, you are better than other writers [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

What would happen if alex implemented the concept of destruction in his sword? Or death? Inheriting something similar to the mystical eyes perception of death would be unstoppable since I could see the death line of the concepts themselves😱😱☠️

Same Chinese novel "so strong" lol I didn't know that the world of Naruto had cultivators but well it's an AU is understood

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