Mel_Aniv
Hi! Author here! I say this novel was the remake of my very first one. I was very inspired when I wrote this book and I underestimated my work since then. But now that I've matured, I can say it was the most outstanding work of mine compared to the rest. While I edit it, I was amazed at how amazing it was. Making my former self, my most inspired time or should I say my Golden years. This novel has a good story that it got me chills when I reread it. I hope you will vote with power stones to my novel for a chance to win. Your support is badly needed for me. All in all, have a great day!
I know this is a story for the competition on Academy and wow... the author brought his A-Game! There are loads of characters and magic and great dialogue and descriptions. It is hard not to be immersed in this story and it is packed with lots of great genres into one novel. If you like fantasy, magic, supernatural, relatability, and immersion- I RECOMMEND THIS BOOK!
The synopsis itself is interesting. The world description is rich, letting us know everything in vivid detail. Those little skills seems cool. The story makes us curious for what may happen next. Vocabulary is good. Grammar not so. It's almost alright, but could be better. The book is a great read so far. All the best author. Waiting for more chapters.