Reviews of The ghost of the Sitri house {DXD fanfic and ... some other anime?}

I star for SD AND CD....its all rushed and some senseless **** happens like riser fighting MC for no reason,,,he is OC, the characters are kinda bland, like in first chp and second it was okay but after that everything seemed kinda rushed,,,,,author bru,,try to improve CD and SD cause everything kinda seems bland, and try to give proper reasons for fights and ****, also MC was a yakuza right, one would you assume to be smart and calculative, well in the latest chp he seems like a retard, like dude just accepts the fight without thinking and spying and you know checking out his enemy,,,,,,,,,build it, meaning, make MC use of his past experiences, i mean thats the reason why I read this story, to see how an SI yakuza would live

At this point in time the plot seems to develop interestingly enough. The author seems to be avoiding Cliché members so far and has taken a development path rarely seen in fics. As a result, whilst his or her language skills are not the best, the plot makes more than up for it and the level of said language skills is still better then most. Its not spelling or regular grammar that I refer to, but using the wrong variant of words for the sentence structure used. This is something that indicates that the author does his or her best to provide his or her story with few mistakes, and will likely grow by leaps and bounds in the process of writing it. All in all, I like the plot thus far and look forward to reading more.

harem suggestion is Sona - Tsubaki - Serafall - Kuroka - Yasaka - Koneko - Rossweisse - Ravel - Gabriel - Ophis - Grayfia - Gresilda - Xenovia please think of them this is the best harem issei can get rest of his harem

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Forced marriage beta cuck mc just garbage 🤮 not for me ........... ........ ........ . ... . ... .. ................. .. .................. ...

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Make mc have a little harem with op waifu and have company to make money.MC must have ruthless subordinate to kill enemy without mercy. Make hajime op faster so he can belp mc to realise his dream.

If you want to read a novel with poor writing quality, bad character introductory, and with chapters shorter than my patience, by all means, give this story a go. All in all the story wouldn't be so bad if the author extended the chapters a little out and made some much-needed editing.

This is really good but...............................................how is this a system fan-fic it’s good but again it’s not a system fic so I was lied to but I’m glad cause don’t think I would’ve clicked if it didn’t say system soo yea

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Yakuza i hope this fanfiction no cold MC............................ ......................................................................................

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