At this point in time the plot seems to develop interestingly enough. The author seems to be avoiding Cliché members so far and has taken a development path rarely seen in fics. As a result, whilst his or her language skills are not the best, the plot makes more than up for it and the level of said language skills is still better then most. Its not spelling or regular grammar that I refer to, but using the wrong variant of words for the sentence structure used. This is something that indicates that the author does his or her best to provide his or her story with few mistakes, and will likely grow by leaps and bounds in the process of writing it. All in all, I like the plot thus far and look forward to reading more.
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