JustLetMeSleep
Extremely well-written story. I certainly felt a few chills while reading this. Intriguing concept with a world that has sealed away all ghosts in a secluded place. I look forward to maybe seeing these ghosts break free and wreak havoc. Also of note was the crazy serial killer attacking the protagonist in her apartment while she slept. It all played out just like one of my favorite slasher horror movies. Great pacing so far. Also intrigued by this futuristic horror video game the protagonist is about to play. Sounds like she might be in for some scares quite soon. Grammar and prose and good and make for an easy read. All in all, quite an enjoyable experience.
Writing Quality: Top quality. No noticeable error that could affect the flow of the story. 5/5 Updating Stability: The schedule is good. No complain about this. Knowing the intense stress that comes with writing, I give the author thumbs up. 5/5 Story Development: The story is about the MC, Feng Ling, and her saga in a resurgent game of horrors and ghosts terrors. Right from the prologue, the game progresses in a great way. No deviation from the plot. 5/5 Character Design: The characters are well planned out and designed. Especially that of Feng Ling. Well made. 5/5 World Background: The world is well built. It's based on urban fantasy. The use of fantasy in a modern world is so fitting. 5/5 Overall: A well written novel, although still at the early stages. 5/5
This story is intriguing, a very constant view when it comes from its initial and middle plots. The writing skill of the author is excellent. Very good use of punctuations, paragraphing and volume in detail. From a first time stand point, this story is very eye-catching from the start lifting a very exciting and happy tone to its readers. The stability of updates are also reasonable good, even if there iss some gaps in between, the detail in story levels up to it. Character designs are pretty good, fitting for the story. Each have their own proposition in plot and makes up to it with its consistent personality, attitude and relations of the other characters involved. Very awesome world background, being it rather a horror based of nightly fronts.
First I can't critique grammars cause English is not my mother tongue and second <3 I am not the kind of a fan of this genre hahaha cause I am scared of dark themes especially horrors but I like it is a good read I just read the small part I couldn't go on for I am not a fan of this genre hahaha XD anyway more ink to your pen author-nim good job on your first story <3
Wow.. This book is very well written, the flow of words and the descriptions are superb. The plot and the story sounds really interesting and thrilling. The new ideas and the wonders would pop in our minds also. Thanks author for writing this one. I would keep this book. Great job!đđđđđ
Hello this is brandon gould the writter of the Tylingariea Epic i am responding to a review swap I very much enjoy this book it is very well written and i like the concept. it is very well paced and i would love to see more chapters of this book. i will be sure to read them if there are more of this book. the way the chartors are decspied makes each of them feel unique and from the prologue i could get a sense of what the world was like that you created good job
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