Blissa
The story is good so far! I like how you vividly narrated the story and the development was nice and steady. I love the plotline and it was an enjoyable read! Keep it going until you reach a million views and you will find it pleasing to the eyes. Characters are showed well with various emotions and I can't help but be attached to them. Kudos and your reader here. Peace ✌️
This is such a good book! The beginning already drew me in, especially the writing was beautiful. Although the writing got simpler later on, it still fits the story wonderfully and we can really feel what the main character feels. (apart from a few mistakes that can be easily done with some editing) The pace is great, neither too slow nor too fast. Once you start reading it, you can't help but want more. Everyone should give this book a try because you won't be disappointed but only love this more and more!
Hi love, woah this does seem like a fam-drama of sorts, it full of ups and downs and lot of it is lively and makes me smile the celebrations especially! This is an intriguing book, the synopsis and book cover are below mediocre so pleaseeee change them as readers need something interesting to catch their eye in order to read! if u need help dm me on Instagram! @gaureeey is my ID! with a little work, you'll be good to go, honest review because I wanna see u grow and evolve as a writer so no sugar coating!
Okay, so the writing quality of this novel is nice although I did notice some writing mistakes like in the first chapter, it was typed dpor instead of door. So I do have suggestions, proofread your chapters to check for spelling mistakes so this type of thing doesn't happen. But other than that, It's a pretty good novel.