RaizarP
I'm only 19 chapters in cause that's all the chapters right now, but I like it a lot. I didn't really know what to expect when I first started reading, but it hooked me with the idea that the author and the OG protagonist are otherworlders with knowledge of this world and that the author hates the new protagonist. The story seems to be off on a good start and I hope it will continue to be just as great and maybe even better as the story continues. Shoutout to the editors too! Keep up the good work author!
Hmm got me hooked up so far... I've seen a lot of this type of genre where the author or reader got transmigrate into their own novel but I've never seen a sadistic author who wants his mc to suffer and a reader got reincarnated as mc at the same time, actually I've probably seen some but ignored it because their poorly written. -I fixed it😅😅😅
I only read around 30 chapter. Story is good. but there are some quirks. Like Author (Mc) is kinda mentally ill. Why don't he just chill? And Mc and heroines aren't they too much? how many heroines does he have? until I read there was more than five. and there are more to come. Although I like harem. but still limited to 2-3 person. Next author used his full brain to scheme but he is dumb enough to not see change in Mc. I wanted some character development. But author's mentally ill behaviour Started irritating me. And that MC's dumb conversation with heroines are also kinda frustrating. Even I sometimes wanted support author to ruin them.
well, I'd like to say I enjoyed where the story was going at least. It had nice pacing and fleshed out the main character in a way that wasn't boring or forced. The reader isn't being fed everything like a farm animal either, at times this work really gave the opportunity to connect the dots before everything unfolded. What I'm trying to say is, that there was a great foundation for a story here. And that's why I bought all the chapters about a week ago. So I'm not asking for much, but RaizarP, when I say this please keep in mind that this comes from someone that really enjoyed your novel. Either very clearly state that this is dropped on the page itself or just continue writing. I can imagine that a bunch of people, like me, are going to pick this up and get invested in the story, only to spend coins on a story that simply will not progress. Having this in your discord is not enough for your new readers, you really need to put the fact you dropped this novel on here in a place where people can see it.