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glowo1mthPostedthe storyline is confusing, we have mortals ,then God the the system that governs these God. then another system that is sentient , a being higher than the systems and finally primordial laws above that being, but the being can somehow break them. I've never been more confused by a story in the first 50 chapters than this one. and not just that the characters are super inconsistent in their actions ,the vampire girl was willing to fight the evil organization for her sister yet she's hesitating to kill a random kid .the mom was supposed to be super thorough yet she didn't check if a book was missing from the library (keep in mid he's supposed to be unlucky ). I belive our author doesn't have a plan for this story and is just winging it as he goes . and I haven't even talked about the mcs previous world where we have so many diff plot lines going on there ,from quency to Ali vs Kevin to the random girl from his memory to the guy that killed ria . too much fat in this story ,too many useless storylines and we're still supposed to be 8 years away from the main storyline starting .🤦♂️🤦♂️
- glowo2mthCommented
kinda nit-picking , but you can't just always say "he used knowledge from the novel" too much , makes it kinda dull
The rune incorporated the skill known as "Supreme Mind," which enhanced a person's mental faculties, making their thinking twenty times faster and stronger than before. Strengthening the mind was a challenging feat, as even Fray, who focused on developing his body and enhancing his organs, couldn't strengthen his own mind. Skills that bolstered the mind were considered rare, but Fray had acquired knowledge of the location of this skill from the novel and sent Montaser to retrieve it. - glowo1yrCommented
then why isn't he showin obvious agression towards mc , since he did avoid justice with the help of his family
So after learning that there's no justice in this world unless we make it ourselves the hard way, Nero made that his goal. He decided to make his own justice. - glowo1yrCommented
of course he feels guilty , he experienced those memories and feels like he actually tried raxping her
Not because in the future she was going to make my life a living hell… But because I, for some reason, was feeling guilty. - glowo1yrPosted
i really like how the story is going right now , but there is one issue that i couldn't ignore . its the fact that Mc has 4 talents , it sounds dumb and makes him kinda plot armor carried . what i wished for him to have is like (S) wepon master with (A) magic and (S) enchantment , the story would flow the same and u could make him suprised with the enchantment because he didn't write about about it and only wrote his fighting talents . the story would still be the same but without the annoying element of him having 4 talents