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PapiTaxi6dReplied to PapiTaxiCh 79 The Oracle (2)- PapiTaxi6dCommentedCh 79 The Oracle (2)
- PapiTaxi12dCommentedCh 168 Actually, I'm a bit envious of Angel and Sophie
- PapiTaxi15dCommentedCh 161 Whether I live or die is for you to decide now
- PapiTaxi30dReplied to Nathaniel_Morales_7194
Look how he balances on one foot
...Wait, But combining those two is like trying to kick a ball using only one foot. - PapiTaxi1mthCommented
Please 🙏 Keep her as a sister and nothing more
However... in Sam's view, such a thing would never happen, not ever. - PapiTaxi1mthReplied to juSTAbystandR
She is my favorite one rn the worst one is Zoe imo
Sam didn't want his family to lose their peace and potentially be put in danger because of him. After all, Angel didn't seem to be a kind-hearted heiress, and the consequences were unpredictable. - PapiTaxi1mthReplied to EternalCodex
Sam is pretty OP compared to the average person just that female leads are crazy strong
Sam shook his head and then flashed a brilliant smile. "I just think it's absurd that you consider me your enemy... And even more absurd that you can't deal with me. That's all." - PapiTaxi1mthCommented
Omg the system actually helped him
[Ding! Based on the host's conquest progress, a special skill is awarded!] - PapiTaxi1mthCommentedCh 75 Plan successful
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Would have been better to use the heartbreak excuse 😭
"I just fell off the bed and hit my head on the floor." I initiated a lie to mask the truth of my transmigration into this world. - PapiTaxi1mthCommented
The mother feels to childish and the conversation feels to one sided at beginning some dialogue feels forced but most of it is fine
This is my first time I'm writing an older character and I would like to know from you guys how the interactions are. Like if they are decent, natural, forced or cringey. - PapiTaxi1mthCommented
Unpopular opinion I like the way the story is being written it’s also kinda necessary for the story to be written this way if the plot is going to be any good
The house I was in was rather big and looked quite modern, with a simple but elegant design and decorations all around it. It had one floor and looked to be a western-style house that had an adult touch to it. Although I wouldn't say that it looked like a mansion, it was still a house that looked like it could only be bought by people in the upper middle class. - PapiTaxi1mthPosted
I have read up to chapter 37 and it’s so far pretty good! The MC is called a simp but he really isn’t and overall the mc character is consistent. Side Characters are meh like really meh rn but that’s probably cause it’s the start. World building is also meh but also cause it’s the start. Writing is really good no spelling mistakes no issues with sudden additions or plot. So far very good and highly recommend can’t wait for more (Will update at the 100 chapter)
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I get this probably the original talking instead of the guy that took over but man you know she is gonna fall for another guy rn your main focus should be survival also no real explanation has be provided why the original feels this way besides them being childhood sweethearts
'I know it's not a game, but I don't want to take chances,' I replied, closing my eyes. 'I...I don't want her to die.' - PapiTaxi1mthCommented
Do they actually know everything? Like him talking to himself and the tree?
"You didn't think that you were actually free, right?" She replied, with a hint of amusement in her voice. "There wasn't a single second that you were out of our reach, and there isn't a thing that you have done that we don't know." - PapiTaxi1mthCommented
Thats a really dumb deal on his predecessor part but a Genius part from his mother really good writing
Not even half a year is left, and even when in the game she gave me an extra six months to prove myself, I failed, and in the end, I became her puppet. - PapiTaxi1mthCommented
If his personality changed wouldn’t he be a completely different person? At that point wouldn’t he become a different than the person she fell in love with?
"Even if your body changes, even if your personality changes, I will still love you."