i really like how the story is going right now , but there is one issue that i couldn't ignore . its the fact that Mc has 4 talents , it sounds dumb and makes him kinda plot armor carried . what i wished for him to have is like (S) wepon master with (A) magic and (S) enchantment , the story would flow the same and u could make him suprised with the enchantment because he didn't write about about it and only wrote his fighting talents . the story would still be the same but without the annoying element of him having 4 talents
RaizarP
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LIKERaizarP:As I said, there is a reason for that. I can't tell you the reason yet as it related to the main plot, but... it will be revealed in the future. The Enhancement is also not for himself, so it's not really a plot armor. Just wait for the future so you will know it better