MeatBunKun
After 85 chapters written I decided to post a thank you note here in the reviews section. Yes,I'm aware that the wishes are pointless,but by all means not read my ff if you don't like it. Yes,the Mc doesn't remember anything about the world where he was sent ,but he tries to at least understand what he's doing. Yes, the Mc gets beaten and gets slowly stronger, if that isn't you piece of cake don't read it. Yes, the MC isn't completely normal by any means, but that would be explained later in the story. Yes this is a the 100 ff with dinosaurs and ghouls and yes I'm aware that it's to some extent similar to the show, then again its a ff not an original.
Although I give you props for keeping this fanfic steady for so long since I know how hard it is, the fanfic itself just isn’t great. Mind you, I only read through 3 chapters, so my opinion isn’t exactly great since everything could change for all I know, but the story itself is just so… cringe. I mean, Octavia is suddenly willing to die for him (when I say suddenly, I really mean it. They barely even know each other), and then a few seconds later, she walks out, leaving him. Ah, did I mention that the entire drama started because of a seat belt? Yeah, Bellamy didn’t want him to be unseatbelted(?) Like what? He would’ve gotten out sooner or later. No need to go pointing a gun at him.
It's basically A OC Main character thrown in The 100, it might appear like a recantation or something of the like but it's not so don't read it as such, and you will be fine. Also just ignore the bit about the wish or boon the mc got, it makes no difference in this story. Honestly just removing the boon would work better for the MC growth you want. As it stands any real growth he does to his personal strength means nothing since he is supposed to have the strength of half a spartan which is still quite a bit. I got as far as chapter 40, I think you did a great job on the MC character growth but the Spartans aspect killed the vibe for me there because I always get back to the fact that he was supposed to have the strength of Half a spartan so some of the struggles you give the MC for his character growth aren't as impactful or meaningful because of said boon that is supposed to be present. I would advise any new reader to ignore the chapter where MC gets his boon, and read it as a normal Human struggle it makes the MC's character growth far more interesting.