Review Detail of jhsilver in The 100 : The duty of a leader

It's basically A OC Main character thrown in The 100, it might appear like a recantation or something of the like but it's not so don't read it as such, and you will be fine. Also just ignore the bit about the wish or boon the mc got, it makes no difference in this story. Honestly just removing the boon would work better for the MC growth you want. As it stands any real growth he does to his personal strength means nothing since he is supposed to have the strength of half a spartan which is still quite a bit. I got as far as chapter 40, I think you did a great job on the MC character growth but the Spartans aspect killed the vibe for me there because I always get back to the fact that he was supposed to have the strength of Half a spartan so some of the struggles you give the MC for his character growth aren't as impactful or meaningful because of said boon that is supposed to be present. I would advise any new reader to ignore the chapter where MC gets his boon, and read it as a normal Human struggle it makes the MC's character growth far more interesting.