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jhsilver25dReplied to YoboiduggyTrue but we should also acknowledge that Snape was pretty brutal himself in canon towards James. Both parties were in the wrong.
"Don't tease Severus!" said Lily with a frown. The redhead was sitting next to Sirius and heard James' mockery.- jhsilver2mthCommented
You handled this chapter well. I can already tell that there are going to be a lot of people with biased views because the main character is James Potter. There are simply too many novels on here that exaggerate James character and that will shape their view of him.
Ch 27 Sirius Black - jhsilver2mthReplied to GoldenZega606Ch 27 Sirius Black
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- jhsilver3mthReplied to Chill_House_007
You are right, you should take your own advice. Even the Author acknowledged that he went a bit too far in giving the L's to the MC over in Spacebattel so what are you arguing?
He was pathetic. - jhsilver4mthReplied to Circuit_Board
But he is not wrong though besides the whole hero-villain part. it's only after the last 180-200 chapters does the training cools down, and the pacing is horrible. it's not all training but you could argue that up to chapters 180-200 between 60-80% was training. it's not until chapter 260 that canon finally starts, and can't really use the whole it's a slow-paced story as an excuse.
- jhsilver5mthCommented
I take it this a Chinese fanfiction?
However it has to be that every rule had an exception and on one particular day, in late November, Takeda of the Snow, walked through the wards of Malfoy Manor feeling particularly disappointed. If Mr Malfoy had been hoping to impress, he had failed abysmally. This aura of malice had nothing on the towers of the Black Magi guild that lived...somewhere in the southernmost parts of China. They could reduce armies to quivering messes merely through a single malevolent glance. And after talking civilly with them of all people, Takeda had been pleasantly surprised to find that nothing else held any sort of sway over him. It was as if he was immune to these lesser fears that plagued humanity. A welcome gift to any good negotiator. - jhsilver5mthCommented
There is another Harry Potter fanfic on here where they have the MC fishing somewhere in the UK fishing at a pond and somehow catching a tropical fish. This is pretty normal for chinse fanfictions.
(E/N.: No idea what author is talking about the past few chapters, the title of the Cavendish family is called Duke of Devonshire their estate, however, is in Derbyshire, but even so that's not where MC nor Harry live?? They both live in Surrey which literally borders Greater London, MILES away from both Devonshire and Derbyshire. I'm ranting ik but how hard is it to google that shit? Dude, Caen does not lay across the Dover strait, the Mont Saint-Michel serves the Portsmouth-Caen route, not London and it wasn't even in service until 2002, the Dover strait is part of the english channel not the north sea..... I'll shut up, sorry) - jhsilver5mthReplied to NexIuz
Yup, that's why I made it clear that happens in the TV show, not the books.
I thought my father was kind of crazy almost ruinning the family chasing behind a prophecy but he was right but that came at a high cost - jhsilver6mthReplied to NexIuz
well, even more of a reason to not give away such an important piece of land, and even more of a reason on why it is such an outlandish ask.
"No you would rather throw me to the wall to toil and die , I am not asking Lord Stark I am ordering you as you king " - jhsilver6mthReplied to NexIuz
The whole AU excuse is thrown out the window when the bashing starts happening too much. Let's be real the author is just hard-hating.
"It's too early to think about such things Jon , but you can join the Night's Watch if you want it's an honorable calling ,Starks have manned the wall for generations" - jhsilver6mthReplied to NexIuz
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I thought my father was kind of crazy almost ruinning the family chasing behind a prophecy but he was right but that came at a high cost - jhsilver6mthReplied to Mobius_5trip
It's really not hard to understand why it's not that famous. He has 4 reincarnators which kills the interest of the majority of the readers on this platform. It will pick up eventfully but it will be slow to do so. Either that or it will never really pick up. Depends on how well the author writes this story.
- jhsilver6mthReplied to Zhawan2002
nah bro In the books, it is still being discussed. yes, she went willing at least it's implied but it's not confirmed(although yea let's be honest she did) we don't get more than that and the author has yet to explain these when it comes to her leaving with rhaegar, which is why many fans of the book speculate that he manipulated her.
Also, could a fourteen-to fifteen-year-old Lyanna Stark that was not even of the age of majority consent to that marriage? Her guards were slain and she was spirited away by all accounts. Did it happen at sword point? After all, how could a girl resist a dozen grown men in armour? Did she even have a choice? Or was she a sheltered noble girl deceived by the flowery promises of the experienced and older crown prince? His mother was either foolish, young, lied to, or kidnapped and forced. Those were the most likely scenarios, and Jon did not like either of them. Unless he managed to somehow summon the Resurrection Stone across the dimensions, he would probably never find out since everyone who had any idea of what had happened was long dead. Even Howland Reed and Eddard Stark only arrived to see the end, and it was not even certain if Lyanna was even still alive when they came to the Tower of Joy. The Lord of Greywater Watch had already been summoned to Winterfell to swear fealty, and soon Jon would know whatever the crannoglord knew. - jhsilver7mthReplied to Great_Young_Master
Yeah but being Mistreated as some would say is a big part of character growth. But Jon completely lacks that saga of working through those issues, because as the lack of evidence shows she did nothing to him.
This was a normal occurrence for Rodrik as whenever they met each other, Jon would talk about Lady Stark and what she was doing nonstop. - jhsilver7mthCommented
Yea, he is most definitely a reincarnated person, way too many obvious points.
The update frequency of this fanfic will slow down heavily from now as I've uploaded all of the og author's chapters now, the og author usually only uploads one chapter a month but those chapters usually contain 15-20K words, a new chapter might be uploaded soon as the og author last updated his work on July 27th. Just wanted to give you guys a heads up on this. I will also be transferring one of the best ATLA fanfics I've ever read from ao3 to webnovel so it can get more exposure, it's a unique one as it contains a relationship between Azula and a OC (he might be a reincarnated person, there's quite a lot of hints that points towards it) which is a relationship I rarely see done well, so keep an eye out for that. Peace out and have a nice day. - jhsilver8mthReplied to Sahil_8379
Sorry. I'm confused by your comment do you mean I'm delusional or the person I responded to? After all polygamous relations do exist today. Hell, my great-grandfather had 3 women they all knew and were ok with it. They were catholic by the way. It's just that Harem's story requires a skilled writer.
- jhsilver8mthReplied to SexyDonut
That doesn't work though because there are so many more people than there are rich and powerful, besides that makes an opening for the people to one day get better techniques because now they have superhuman strength that gives them the option to grow. less aura Knights means less competition means more resource for them.
She nodded. "Yes, but even the cheapest will cost a total of 4000 Star coins for everything. We don't have that much money. I just bought some lamps and kitchen utensils. I got you some clothes as well."