JustFanfiction101
I notice a lack of knowledge regarding the original source I don't believe this to be intended. Such as the heavenly god tactics requires a user to have an attribute less soul however in the same chapter you declared he has a fire and lightning one. Also with his older sibling chen Linjian's cultivation being much higher than in the orignal work he was already called a genius but what your right would make him the same level of talent Nie Li showed in glory city. Then the case with Yi ziyun's engagement was in Nie Li's past life not in his current one and wasn't settled until some time after they started school. Now that is off my chest there is also the fact that you rush both your character's cultivation and the storys progression far to much. Thank you have a nice day
Good story from TDG background. Although MC prefer to follow original story, it best add most path to rise as god. TDG offer a lot of path to godrealm but making it foundation for MC with Nie Li is quite acceptable before moving to Draconic Ruins Realm. use more imagination's, Nie li only use what he can remember but author can use other big shot story to steal resources for MC.
This story is generally really good as it followings the story original timeline. I don't understand where people get that the mC is sucking the NieliZ's azz from, I see it as compromising. The author isn't trying to write a harem and Nie Li is in perfect right to have Ye Ziyun. This isn't some hentai harem novel where the MC needs to get all the girls in the book. Overall author keep it up and keep writing your fanfic is really good, and don't mind the bad comments/ reviews.
need more chapter.... you does good work author ... keep it up... (good plan ,good and smart mc) YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY