This story is generally really good as it followings the story original timeline. I don't understand where people get that the mC is sucking the NieliZ's azz from, I see it as compromising. The author isn't trying to write a harem and Nie Li is in perfect right to have Ye Ziyun. This isn't some hentai harem novel where the MC needs to get all the girls in the book. Overall author keep it up and keep writing your fanfic is really good, and don't mind the bad comments/ reviews.
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