I notice a lack of knowledge regarding the original source I don't believe this to be intended. Such as the heavenly god tactics requires a user to have an attribute less soul however in the same chapter you declared he has a fire and lightning one. Also with his older sibling chen Linjian's cultivation being much higher than in the orignal work he was already called a genius but what your right would make him the same level of talent Nie Li showed in glory city. Then the case with Yi ziyun's engagement was in Nie Li's past life not in his current one and wasn't settled until some time after they started school. Now that is off my chest there is also the fact that you rush both your character's cultivation and the storys progression far to much. Thank you have a nice day
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