Nightingale367
The story may not have been that great at the start, but I'm amazed by this author who actually makes the effort to keep up the daily chaps. Besides maintaining the daily chaps, the quality of writing could be seen increasing throughout the author's writing and more ideas, maybe original or so it seems to me. There are multiple povs at points of times which seems like fillers, but I guess that that's just a way to cover up for plot holes developed when the author still wasn't ready. The previous chaps which have been updated has some storyline changes as well, the changes might be subtle but if actually makes the reading a much more pleasant experience.
I love cultivation novels in general and I like the intrigue that you tried to bring to yours, I'm still only a little over a dozen chapters so I can't give you my categorical opinion on your novel, I still need a lot of reading. But I can tell you that I really like your attention to details and the fact that you take your time to write, in this kind of novels itâs easy to get lost along the way but you seem to know where you are going. đ
This kind of stories are not really my cup of tea but after reading a few chapters I ended up spending the night reading it. The scenes are very detailed. I can clearly see the characters' image come alive in my mind. I am liking how the story progresses. I haven't gone too far so we'll see. I added this story to my library and recommends it as a good read. Good luck to the author.
i dont know what author is trying to do a kid of 15 or 16 year is trying to establish a sect, i mean he himself doesn't know **** what is gonna teach the members Another thing he doesn't have resources, cultivation techniques then why are people gonna join the sect And the most ****ty part the first pupil came to the door told mc i am peerless talent let me join and mc is like ok so my sect has everything except geniuses since you are a peerless talent join the sect. i mean what the bloody hell did all the others sects in area just for show and even they are will you accept anyone that says i am a peerless talent without checking or testing By reading synopsis i thought it might a good sect building novels since quite a large amount of chapters are released but i cant even get myself to read more than 10 chapters pure bull**** going on in this novel
It's a good story and I love it, I also have taken some hints about writing novels , mind you I am not saying that I am copypasting before you kill me,I am saying that it's good enough that people can learn how to write by taking a page off this book ,I also write novels and so know the hardships of it đ
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This would get a lower score but I can see the author has written about 200 chapters as of now. Itâs inspirational to see this authorâs perseverance, truly. But I had to drop this novel at chapter 15... due to reasons such as a forced plot and dialogue that is really bad. Iâm sure the author has gotten way better with his or her writing now that they have passed 200 chapters, they are bound to make improvements. Sadly I wonât continue reading this as itâs first half was very terrible and nonsensical for my taste. I wish to read this authorâs next work as Iâm certain that they will do a better job next time. Good Luck author!