Review Detail of TOMB_DRONE in Talentless sect master chosen by the system (Being rewritten)

It's a good story and I love it, I also have taken some hints about writing novels , mind you I am not saying that I am copypasting before you kill me,I am saying that it's good enough that people can learn how to write by taking a page off this book ,I also write novels and so know the hardships of it 😃