Reviews of Super Soldier System
Super Soldier System
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I now have officially three S's in my name, im now scummy, sloth and shameless. So i definitely had to put a 5 star review on my own novel. Please read my novel.
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One of, or the best I've novel I've known. Just hope that MC can do magic because why not? Its a 'FANTASY WORLD' you know, its like you are eating a burger without any patties (Maybe that just makes it into a veggie sandwich?) What I'm saying is magic is crucial in a fantasy world. Like you can invent new magic that complements a soldier's style or make guns, aircraft, vehicles based on magic. What I'm saying is (From my perspective) that Its not fantasy for me if he can't use magic. You know what I mean? You don't have to take this seriously. It's just my preference because you know MAGIC IS COOL COOLER, COOLEST
Sooooo. Mc torturing a 14 yr old, before he’s even ten. Other then the author being a twisted psychopath occasionally and having his pre **** mc do some very despicable actions. The story also lacks world building. If the author didn’t tell the reader the mc is in some magical version of Germany in central Europe, the reader wouldn’t have been clued in. Since in almost every aspect the setting is the most generic magical medieval Isekai ever. All the characters in the story suffer from being one dimensional and cliche including the protagonist. The side characters in the form of his parents, the system, or the seven orphans are one more and cringe inducing amounts of cliche. Some characters look like their about to be good and then they are cut out from the story or just relegated to being a cliche.
Hey author, you probably won't see this and I know that you are going through a period of "enlightening" but I just want to let you know that this is one of the first webnovels I've ever read and it still one of my favorite. I know you might be having a hard time finding inspiration to continue this series, but i just wanted to let you know that reading this inspired me in different creative ideas that I might've never even thought of. And even if you don't update, just know that there is at least one person getting hyped on the idea of a new chapter and checking everyday to see if you've updated :)
A story about a man who died in the hand of thieves twisted personality wanted to be a soldier in previous life gets a chance to fulfill his dream but start killing for fun . Is able to see memory of people he killed but still toucher girls of age 16 by striping them naked and stabbing them with knife with no reason . It gives a bad image of soldiers author should change the name of the novel to stop ruining soldier name . Starting was good but at the end the storyline had got from being a the best soldier to a psychotic killer, tourcherer, enslave other innocent children to become killer with twisted psychology. World design and grammar are above average but author is not able to justify the title of the novel
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