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ThatGrassIsGreener
ThatGrassIsGreenerLv133yrThatGrassIsGreener

Sooooo. Mc torturing a 14 yr old, before he’s even ten. Other then the author being a twisted psychopath occasionally and having his pre **** mc do some very despicable actions. The story also lacks world building. If the author didn’t tell the reader the mc is in some magical version of Germany in central Europe, the reader wouldn’t have been clued in. Since in almost every aspect the setting is the most generic magical medieval Isekai ever. All the characters in the story suffer from being one dimensional and cliche including the protagonist. The side characters in the form of his parents, the system, or the seven orphans are one more and cringe inducing amounts of cliche. Some characters look like their about to be good and then they are cut out from the story or just relegated to being a cliche.

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ScummySlothAuthor
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Thanks for the criticism my guy it really helps me. See, i know my own novel is a hudge pudge of trash i threw together, its all bull****, this novels purpose is for me to learn from my mistakes. After im done with this thing im thinking of writing a second novel that is more solid than this pile of garbage. So thanks for your honest review!!

ScummySlothAuthor
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Thanks for the criticism my guy it really helps me. See, i know my own novel is a hudge pudge of trash i threw together, its all bull****, this novels purpose is for me to learn from my mistakes. After im done with this thing im thinking of writing a second novel that is more solid than this pile of garbage. So thanks for your honest review!!

ScummySlothAuthor
ScummySlothAuthorAuthorScummySlothAuthor

Thanks for the criticism my guy it really helps me. See, i know my own novel is a hudge pudge of trash i threw together, its all bull****, this novels purpose is for me to learn from my mistakes. After im done with this thing im thinking of writing a second novel that is more solid than this pile of garbage. So thanks for your honest review!!

ScummySlothAuthor
ScummySlothAuthorAuthorScummySlothAuthor

Thanks for the criticism my guy it really helps me. See, i know my own novel is a hudge pudge of trash i threw together, its all bull****, this novels purpose is for me to learn from my mistakes. After im done with this thing im thinking of writing a second novel that is more solid than this pile of garbage. So thanks for your honest review!!

ScummySlothAuthor
ScummySlothAuthorAuthorScummySlothAuthor

Thanks for the criticism my guy it really helps me. See, i know my own novel is a hudge pudge of trash i threw together, its all bull****, this novels purpose is for me to learn from my mistakes. After im done with this thing im thinking of writing a second novel that is more solid than this pile of garbage. So thanks for your honest review!!

ScummySlothAuthor
ScummySlothAuthorAuthorScummySlothAuthor

Thanks for the criticism my guy it really helps me. See, i know my own novel is a hudge pudge of trash i threw together, its all bull****, this novels purpose is for me to learn from my mistakes. After im done with this thing im thinking of writing a second novel that is more solid than this pile of garbage. So thanks for your honest review!!

ScummySlothAuthor
ScummySlothAuthorAuthorScummySlothAuthor

Thanks for the criticism my guy it really helps me. See, i know my own novel is a hudge pudge of trash i threw together, its all bull****, this novels purpose is for me to learn from my mistakes. After im done with this thing im thinking of writing a second novel that is more solid than this pile of garbage. So thanks for your honest review!!

ScummySlothAuthor
ScummySlothAuthorAuthorScummySlothAuthor

Thanks for the criticism my guy it really helps me. See, i know my own novel is a hudge pudge of trash i threw together, its all bull****, this novels purpose is for me to learn from my mistakes. After im done with this thing im thinking of writing a second novel that is more solid than this pile of garbage. So thanks for your honest review!!

ScummySlothAuthor
ScummySlothAuthorAuthorScummySlothAuthor

Thanks for the criticism my guy it really helps me. See, i know my own novel is a hudge pudge of trash i threw together, its all bull****, this novels purpose is for me to learn from my mistakes. After im done with this thing im thinking of writing a second novel that is more solid than this pile of garbage. So thanks for your honest review!!

ScummySlothAuthor
ScummySlothAuthorAuthorScummySlothAuthor

Thanks for the criticism my guy it really helps me. See, i know my own novel is a hudge pudge of trash i threw together, its all bull****, this novels purpose is for me to learn from my mistakes. After im done with this thing im thinking of writing a second novel that is more solid than this pile of garbage. So thanks for your honest review!!

ScummySlothAuthor
ScummySlothAuthorAuthorScummySlothAuthor

Thanks for the criticism my guy it really helps me. See, i know my own novel is a hudge pudge of trash i threw together, its all bull****, this novels purpose is for me to learn from my mistakes. After im done with this thing im thinking of writing a second novel that is more solid than this pile of garbage. So thanks for your honest review!!

ScummySlothAuthor
ScummySlothAuthorAuthorScummySlothAuthor

Thanks for the criticism my guy it really helps me. See, i know my own novel is a hudge pudge of trash i threw together, its all bull****, this novels purpose is for me to learn from my mistakes. After im done with this thing im thinking of writing a second novel that is more solid than this pile of garbage. So thanks for your honest review!!

ScummySlothAuthor
ScummySlothAuthorAuthorScummySlothAuthor

Thanks for the criticism my guy it really helps me. See, i know my own novel is a hudge pudge of trash i threw together, its all bull****, this novels purpose is for me to learn from my mistakes. After im done with this thing im thinking of writing a second novel that is more solid than this pile of garbage. So thanks for your honest review!!

ScummySlothAuthor
ScummySlothAuthorAuthorScummySlothAuthor

Thanks for the criticism my guy it really helps me. See, i know my own novel is a hudge pudge of trash i threw together, its all bull****, this novels purpose is for me to learn from my mistakes. After im done with this thing im thinking of writing a second novel that is more solid than this pile of garbage. So thanks for your honest review!!

Nryte
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Wow I just happen to like this novel and someone insinuates it's trash?! Imagine my shock...have my tastes regressed or are yours just out of this world? Don't you know literature is either descriptive or narrative? Our writer here is more in the narrative side but how is that a problem? Descriptive writting just takes up more words trying to say a simple idea.. the fact that the author can be less descriptive and more narrative and still produce more words tells me this author-nim is unpolished Jade...truly a talent... How dare you give this book such a meagre rating? simply because you don't like the character of the character? Will you then say Shakespeare's writting is barely so because Juliet decided to die for Romeo before confirming if he was truly dead... Forgive me for failing to understand how your brain works

Nryte
NryteLv12Nryte

Wow I just happen to like this novel and someone insinuates it's trash?! Imagine my shock...have my tastes regressed or are yours just out of this world? Don't you know literature is either descriptive or narrative? Our writer here is more in the narrative side but how is that a problem? Descriptive writting just takes up more words trying to say a simple idea.. the fact that the author can be less descriptive and more narrative and still produce more words tells me this author-nim is unpolished Jade...truly a talent... How dare you give this book such a meagre rating? simply because you don't like the character of the character? Will you then say Shakespeare's writting is barely so because Juliet decided to die for Romeo before confirming if he was truly dead... Forgive me for failing to understand how your brain works