Nice story, nice plot, and nice characters, BUT! Every your/you're, their/they're are wrongly placed! I liked everything about the story, well i guess that the MC is way oberpowered, but who doesnt like an overpowered MC am i right? But pls, please! Get those corrected it makes my eyes bleed...
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