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What I read so far made me wonder why this story isn't popular yet? I loved the way author built the main character, and the side characters as well. it's well balanced, without exaggerating one character over another. keep the good work, your writing speed is superb and your writing quality is charming, I will add this piece of art into my addition and come back later to enjoy. I liked the way you are heading, if I guessed it right, as two minds in the same body, it would be funny if you kept doing it the same way, but I think the story will turn complicated later on, right?
Firstly, I like the story concept with a twist to the regular reincarnation/transmigration troupes. The writing quality is pretty good and I didnt find any errors of any sort. But if i had to nitpick, sometimes the narration slips back and forth between past and present tenses. But that not something one round of editing cant fix. Secondly. I love the character design, especially the contrast between Venus and Eli's personality makes for a fun and interesting read. And the other four major characters all have distinct personalities. The pacing of the story is really good and the setting seems to be the modern world same as ours. Anyway, Im excited to follow Venus and Eli in their journey.
the name was what first thing that caught my eyes, then the synopsis, after reading it I was hooked by the descriptive writing and the pace of the book, the fl is quite interesting with each turn of the page. I'm looking forward to more of it with excitement. also a reverse harem, hehehe those type of books that snags a reader's interest are quite rare
Itβs refreshing.... it reminds me of good old Wholesome anime.... (the first few chapters annoyed/βmade me cringeβ with the mcβs awkwardness, but I think that was on purpose)..... the chapters donβt feel drawn out or repetitive and the characters donβt feel all βflatβ and βorbitingβ the Mc.... oh and the grammar and the like seem good....itβs hard to βget into itβ when you suddenly have stop and think βwhat was that meant to beβ or βWhat does that word/statement even meanβ....(if there are some mistakes I just Didnβt notice them and/or my brain just autocorrected it for me)
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Hey I am fan when I see female is strong enough to fight back...I am instantly hooked...I love it when the fragile and beautiful or not beautiful turn out to be world savior...Yes I am all yes for it...Your story writting is really good author...πππ Keep up the good work...I just wish people must check out actual good work...Never mind..You keep writting...All the best for futureπππ
This.Is.My.Jam! This is the type of story I've been looking for! Good characters, good setting and good writing, Im not to much into reverse harem (Im more of a regular harem fan) but I don't care! Because Im having way to much fun with this. I haven't read it all, but I will be coming back for more that's for sure, keep it going Author!
Come to think of it , what would u expect from a villainess ??? Oozing hatred? Torture? Bloodthirstiness? But have u ever tried getting to know her reasons , every character has a story to tell , same applies to a villainess ... This book would trigger our thoughts aswell offering to uh an in-depth understanding of situations , though in an entertaining way
WOW just WOW!! The Autor is just a great writer. This story has got everything from a beautiful plot, to dynamic well-rounded character and amazing well-paced storytelling. The author does a wonderful use of contrasting personalities and foreshadowing. I enjoyed the well written, immersive experience. The author absolutely knows the story very well and makes it very enjoyable to the readers. Well done for an exceptional work!! Deserves more than a 5/5!!