Reviews of Strength of Will (Reboot)

This reboot is superior to the original (Except for the chapter count), even when the original itself has its own charm. So, if any of you guys reading this review love or even hate the original, you should consider reading this fanfic too. Or even you guys who haven't read the original yet, you should consider reading this too. Heck, everyone should read this! Keep up the amazing work Author-san!!! (Ps: This review was sponsored by R*id Sh*dow L*gend, go download it now for free!) (Pss: Author-san, my eyes were having seizure reading your misspelled name on the synopsis, please fix it! XD!) (Psss: That's it from me, why are you guys still reading my review?) (Pssss: STOP READING!!!) (Psssss: B-Baka!) (Pssssss: P-Pervert!)

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rewriten is better than og's chapter

I love this fanfic, I hope the author can continue doing a good job on the reboot !!! In the future I will give a better review with my detailed opinion about the reboot, for the moment I am just giving my support to the author.

I wont lie im ot mad that it could be dropped just incredibly dissapointed that this story could go to waste i can find basically no storys that even involve undertail charechters

This is absolutely Amazing! I'm a huge Undertale Fan and was absolutely thrilled to find out that this was a Fanfic about that! Even though I have not read the original I am still going to rate this five stars because of the Amazing writing and plot!

I enjoy this series very much! I was also wondering will there be an average upload like every other day or just at your convenience? Either way I hope it continues!

AMAZING. This is an incredibly well written novel, but before you read it go read the original version. The original version of this novel was already rather high end as far as Webnovel content goes and after reading the original, certain subtle bits as well as the major changes that have been made in this reboot will feel even more pronounced and exciting. Even though the original won't ever be finished the 100+ chapters that are there are well worth the time it takes to read them. The quality of writing is on the level I expect and rarely see from experienced authors with several hundred chapters of writing experience as well as a history of reading to back up their vocabulary. I would say talent as well but I don't want to discredit the hard work that has been put in. the story itself makes you feel immersed it builds tension and submerges you into it's world making you feel a genuine connection to the characters. The world itself is also incredibly well built which surprises me greatly considering both that the Undertale portion is from an AU and that the BNHA portion is almost entirely original content. The only thing lacking is updates but what can you do? It's not often that inspiration strikes and when It does it is rare for anyone to be ready with keyboard close to hand. Besides when the quality is so high does it even matter?

I havent read the reboot yet sorry, just really wanted to give my opinion on the original in my opinion it was cringe but I still enjoyed it. It was a lot more I guess about how she felt and was introspective which nothing wrong with really but like all things it needs to be done right but this wasnt it chief, because it never felt like it added to the story much i never understood the character better because it was repetitive in many ways in my opinion, I didnt learn more i just learnt the same things in a different way. Plus a lot of what she said sorta sounds like “im #deep” stuff from what i remember. I had a lot more to write but as i thought more about it more came back to me and I just gotta say while the original im not gonna say amazing everything it tried to do wasnt forced and well done just the introspective stuff was cringe

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I don’t usually right reviews for books, just a select few i see have potential or are just that good, and i feel this book is both of these, seeing as to how i really enjoyed the original, bug now its even getting a reboot, gets the blood pumping you know. Well that was a long sentence, but anyways keep up with the good work author-san and stay healthy!! That includes everyone not just the author!!! Don’t think you guys and gals aren’t included with that last statement.

Probably shouldn't review it yet, seeing as there aren't that many chapters out. However, I have hope it will be just as good or even better than the one before the reboot. *Fingers crossed*

I've read the first book before the reboot and this one will be just as good if not better when the author gets back from there vacay and starts writing again

Beautiful character building and how to frisk was reincarnated into a world where the strong bullies the weak in the dark and was saved by a person. Very good can´t wait to see where this goes but sometimes I question the update time since it looks random but I am fine with an upload a week (Since another fanfiction actually update once a week and it's still at the top).

The original fanfic you wrote was already really good and I loved it. if you have improved and this is going to be even better, then you already got all my powerstones.

Yep, great story so far. It definitely is an improved version of the original so far. I wish there is more chapters already than it already has at this point of time lol 😛

Obciously 5 stars cause I have read before reboot and I am amazed. =)—$:&;&;$;$;):$$:!:$:$:$!;):):)$:):7:$:7$:7:$:$$:6:):6:$$:$:$:!:$!:$:!:$