still missing his martial arts skill

you're missing martial arts from his skill list

I think his stats are two or three levels too high

outside of school time there is no regulation about the village it's only during school and technically School hasn't started

5 days from Virginia to Alaska is like Speed Demon for 1925 I would expect more like 7 to 8 days

I know that stories can't be all puppies and rainbows and smiles but that was a really traumatic

that he had this gift till now.

you made me cry in the first three chapters very good for a writer who's just beginning so keep up the good work

is there a long shot in bringing her back

that was world of Darkness magic put on steroids and the world of Darkness doesn't like magic which means that you can accidentally erase yourself so yeah that was you know Universe ending magic power

thank you for the chapter and welcome back

that would be so awesome Raven's birthday at the dead end when Trigon tries to pull some s*** oh that's going to be a heyday

one of the most powerful weapons across the universe is giant rock traveling at speed

that's exactly what I Envision when I think about a podcast with Poison Ivy and Harley Quinn

that's too bad if you're readership is dropped I really like your story here so

Fly meet hammer

warped to her apartment

if you really start looking at Naruto from a different perspective from book one all the way to the Indo Shippuden or all the way until yeah all the way until the end of Shippuden then you'll find out that Saratoga was not a good leader and he let danzo get away with way too much stuff and you can't say that he didn't know of a lot of what the dark ninja of kohana was doing

death to the cancer of kohana

I read the actual light novels for DxD and I cannot remember if the king pieces provide that initial boost but also ultimately stunts the person that use it or if it's just a out now booster and doesn't stunt his actual potential