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Starting life in another world

Author: FallenCat
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This is just fanfic I'm very lazy to write something like a disclaimer or anything like that so I will just leave a word here "if you're the owner of the original story and doesn't like my story please tell me" Synopsis: "A sick boy felt brokenhearted and died. That's not the end because he will go to another world!" That's your synopsis boy! And this story is free so I just use Grammarly Application to assist me so if you can't accept my bad grammar please leave as fast as possible because I will not responsible for your brain cells that get burn by reading my book. Pat reon. com/FallenCat

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Chapter 1chapter 001: a memory

A lone boy sits in his bed and staring out of the window, his eyes are unfocused and his mind is completely in a mess. He has a problem with his heart and lungs from when he is in high school and he must stop his dream to attend a college because of his health issues.

His condition has become more severe in the last two years and a year ago he must make a painful decision, that's... break up with his girlfriend.

Just for something like pride and hope...

This decision is something that not just hurt the girl but also the boy.

Pride, because of this shitty word he must break up with his girlfriend because he feels he can't match her with freelancers status and a broke man that just can sit in his bad every day or you can call him a neet?

Hope, and because of this word, he steels himself and makes this difficult decision. Because he hope she will find her happiness without need to worry about his health issues, because he hopes she can achieve her dream, because he hopes she can attend the college and graduate with a very excellent grade, and because he hopes.. with this she can find a right man who can make her life full of happiness..

"Maybe I'm really a selfish person, or maybe I just a greedy person... "

Every day the boy feel a regret

Every time he sees her picture with her new boyfriend he always wondering

Why I'm not there?

Why I'm not the one who holds your hand?

Why I'm not the one who you hold dear in your eyes?

Why I'm not the one who share happiness with you?

Is the decision I take is wrong?

Am I wrong in the first place?

And the worst news he gets is coming this morning

A letter of invitation to her wedding

From the girl who shares love and sorrow with him for 5 years...

From the girl who confesses to him when they're in their last year of junior high school...

Because they're in the same class they can study together, complete the homework together, walking home together and graduate together.

The boy even sacrifices his future by attending the high school in the same region with his girlfriend just to make sure they will always together.

But all of this just become a memory

A memory that erases with a page of invitation letters

A smile surfaced in the face of the boy

A smile full of unwillingness

And the eyes that full of regret slowly close and never open again.

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I can say that despite the atrocious grammar and spelling, it is a very good fanfic. Sometimes the story can be annoying and sometimes it can be exciting, but overall enjoyable. I also like how the story/Author doesn't solely focus on the MC too much and actually shows some of the other characters opinion and perspective. But Jesus Christ the grammar and spelling is a major turn off for new readers, the only thing that made me stick around was the story and the fact that I liked where it was heading. The one thing that I don't like, the one character that I actually don't find interesting is the MC. While the Author has done amazing with the direction the story is heading I can't say the rest for the other aspects as most of the world-building and characters were already established. The MC often calls and treats Emilia as a kid or naive, but I also think that the MC is naive, like a child trying to act tough, serious and *****-like. He cant let go of the past and surprisingly neither can the past, which is kind of annoying looking at it from the outsiders perspective. Now, these reasons aren't the reason I don't find the MC as an interesting character, in fact, I don't see him as a character at all, more like a tool. The MC is reincarnated and has barely done anything fun because of a disease that forces him to stay at home in his previous world. When he is reincarnated into a different world he still clinging to that world and the relationships in it, which I can understand, but is very annoying. The reason I think of him as a tool is that he has no ambition and only wishes to have the bare minimum to survive which is fine and all but is extremely boring. The fact that he starts to take interest in Emilia is also ****ed up as he kind of just wants a replacement for his ex-lover. An emotional support pillar I guess you could say. But what bugs me the most is that he has no drive, no goals, no dreams, and anything particularly noteworthy that separates himself from the common rabble except his strength. He has so much power but he uses it to support Emilia instead for his own goals and does everything for Emilia, it feels like watching a loyal dog doing all sorts of tricks. Now I don't want to be that guy that I'm pretty sure we all hate (or maybe that's just me) but "Make a harem". It is actually so annoying to see that he has no one to cling to except Emilia and only uses his awesome abilities for someone else. If he had a harem he wouldn't seem that attached to Emilia and **** like that and maybe he might have his own ambitions not just following Emilia around just like Rem following Subaru, or Subaru following Emilia. It doesn't even have to be a harem, just make it so he does not live only for Emilia cause it's actually annoying as **** in my opinion when someone has no motives and just does what other people tell them to. Also while I think the MC "thinks" he is in love with Emilia, I feel like it's more sinister than that as I feel like instead of looking at her as Emilia, I think he's see's Emilia as replacement for his past lover that he had to break up with due to his disease. I feel like he does all these amazing and wonderful things for her to burry the guilt in his heart so that he convinces himself that he loves Emilia, he himself has somewhat recognized and even touched upon that subject in his thoughts. That's all I had to say and I hope that the MC gets better.

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