Writing Quality 5-Stars
Story Development 4-Stars
Character Design 4-Stars
Updating Stability 5-Stars
World Background 5-Stars
Writing Quality
[ Not much to say here, just read it and you'll see it for yourself ]
Story Development
[ There are only 2 Chapters as of now and I really don't know where the Author is going with the Story .
It is likely that the Mc will join the Jedi together with her sister *Spoiler* Ashoka Tano.]
Character Design
[ She(the Mc) doesn't seem Bland and seems to be a very round character. Something unique on Webnovel ;)!
Well, there are still only two chapters and I don't know much about her personality etc etc but ...it seems promising.]
Updating Stability
[ As of now, there is a chapters each day, which is good ]
World Background
[ The Author seems be knowledgeable about the Star wars Universe even If it is only a bit but .....the Star wars Universe is very complex and only hard core fans would know very, very much about it.]
It seems to be very promising but it isn't perfect ....but hell, nobody is perfect so...
One of the only things I am sad about is that our Mc lost her memories because that's just making her more of an Oc than an Si and well, I like Si Mc's more because they have an actual Chance to change anything in the Story.
Mc's without knowledge about the Star Wars Universe aren't able to change anything.
I mean....Yoda wasn't able to Change anything, so one more Person without knowledge won't either.
So I don't expect any major changes to the Star wars Story.
Anakin will be a Sith and Papletine will be the Emperor, that won't change! And If it changes, which is not logical possible, than I really want to know how that'll happen!
Another thing I don't understand is this Evil Cosmic entites thing because that just makes me as a reader not really able to enjoy the Book because I always have in mind that there are some Dark powerful Beings after her(Mc) .
(An: English isn't my mother language and I usually don't prove read, so enjoy Imao🙃😈)
