SIENDONIA
The story background was well displayed early on! The concept is really interesting, the author's writing style is very measured. The internal dialogue is very natural and flows quite nicely with the author's style. The story has a lot of potential, powers are very well described in the fight scenes and make visualization pretty easy. Very cool story.
Having a tsundere female love interest was really a breath of fresh air for me. The plot and story are pretty interesting so far, and the author's stability of updates is very, very stable. The grammar could be improved, though. I also often find the character's interactions in the story to be kind of awkward. I think this novel will go a long way, and I can't wait to see what the author has in store for us.