I like how the author seems to describe his/her character. The plot and concept were also good. I like how the author makes the mysterious person mysterious.
I got to say that this book is quite interesting.
Though the author was good with grammar, it is still best if the author can put (") to indicate dialogue.
Mysterious love story . love of the queen of ghosts:
The story is good as the concept and plot were good. I must say that even I was captivated by it.
Though the only problem for me is the author's punctuation.
A good story that can attract the reader's attention. The author has a good imagination and plot as the story is quite interesting. Hope for other chapters.