A good novel so far! Only a few chapters so far, but already hooked onto the story, hopefully more starts getting fleshed out as the author goes deeper into the story, but so far enjoyable read.

Fantastic novel so far, really enjoying it. The author's publishing pace is really good too! Looking forward to seeing how it develops, it already has a great start so far!

Fantastic novel so far! Glad that the author has so many chapters out already! I don't usually read fantasy romance, but this one had me hooked from the beginning. 10/10

Story with a great start and tons of potential! Was easy to read and the writing style was refreshing. Really hoping the author keeps updating and developing this novel 😊

Incredible story right off the bat, got enthralled right away and can't wait for more chapters to come out! Author has a great writing style and an interesting concept that he draws on in a unique way.

Author here! Thanks for all the patience and kind words! The plan is to regularly post.... and just keep doing that one step, hahah! Hope everyone who gave my novel a chance enjoys it!

Story progression is very balanced and good! I need more! From the writing you can tell the author has a clear idea in mind with this novel, its a brilliant flower waiting to bloom, hoping they post faster so we can see how the story plays out :)

Interesting concept, can't wait to see how the story evolves going forward! Characters are great, story direction seems pretty organized and easy to understand. Recommended reading.

I really enjoyed the dialogue between the characters, the author is very detailed in describing objects, rooms, and the environment. The story captured my attention and was super intense, definitely not for anyone under 17. The descriptions are very vivid and draw you into the emotions of the character and the moments. Definitely recommend!

The story background was well displayed early on! The concept is really interesting, the author's writing style is very measured. The internal dialogue is very natural and flows quite nicely with the author's style. The story has a lot of potential, powers are very well described in the fight scenes and make visualization pretty easy. Very cool story.

Really captivating start, the novel is clearly very well planned out so it might seem slow, but the pace is as measured as entertaining. A fantastic writing style that also helps show the great character that the author built. The story flows really well!

Really vivid storytelling, interesting plot. The story is rapidly building momentum at a thoughtful pace. Can't wait to see how it further develops!