Aliast
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Aliast1yrReplied to cuttie_Mickey1968Apologize for the long absence, I was abroad for weeks and just got back home. It saddened me, but I plan to end it here. Have to write my other novels next month. So sorry to say this - I just haven't got the time to change its completion status :'(
Ch 119 So ... Is it Over?- Aliast1yrReplied to cuttie_Mickey1968Ch 100 Angel of Lies
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Dewi, eaea
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Ex-beta? So, it's like rank where people can be replaced after some times?
As an ex-betha, her mother is much more aware of the problems that often arise while on duty. That's why the queen gave her a talisman necklace because it was proven to protect her when she was in danger. Even though her mother was in danger, for Keren's birth mother the most important thing was that her daughter was safe and would carry on the task that the white wolf queen had not accomplished. If the queen's life is threatened, the queen will keep her daughter because Keren is also predicted by the queen as a future queen. - Aliast1yrCommented
If he's weak, why is he an alpha?
Renji is thirty years old. Renji is Alpha, even though he is weak but Keren is always helpful when tracking the whole village and guarding the island. Keren is also an expert on location maps. - Aliast1yrReplied to cuttie_Mickey1968Ch 41 You Sure Have Competence Kink
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oh, tebakannya salah besar XD
Detik berikutnya Perempuan tersebut memekik senang luar biasa. "Oh, coba lihat itu! Empat mobil Militer. Mereka baru saja berhenti." Telunjuknya menunjuk keluar dengan dramatis, "Pria-pria itu pasti anggota Militer. Ya ampun! aku melihat mereka sekarang. aku harus mengambil foto mereka, mereka mengingatkanku pada saudara-saudaraku," dia sibuk mengeluarkan sesuatu dari dalam tas mungilnya. Kamera. "Nak, boleh aku bertukar duduk denganmu?" Yumi bangkit dengan jantung berdegup hebat. Yumi menggeser tubuhnya, dan keduanya berupaya melalui celah sempit di antara tempat duduk di dalam pesawat ekonomi, "Seperti bernostalgia dengan masa mudaku," perempuan paruh baya membuat pujian berlebih. - Aliast1yrCommented
vibe-nya si ibu ini jd tokoh penting. mungkin calon mertua wkwk
"tak apa, kamu tak perlu malu. Anakku pernah mengalami serangan panik dalam perjalanan ke Jakarta. Mereka harus membiusnya. Kau sudah mencengkeram kursi itu sejak kita berangkat dari Kuala Lumpur," Perempuan itu tersenyum ramah, "Kubilang pada Suamiku: 'gadis itu tak sadar kita duduk di sebelahnya, dan dia membiarkan bukunya, tidak sekalipun membalik halaman bukunya'. Tapi sekarang kita sudah mendarat. Sudah selesai." - Aliast1yrPosted
Been reading up to 8 chaps now. Quite a cool plot you got here. I like how you stick to your character designs. Raymund only think of this as entertainment and nothing more. He's pretty laidback, not strictly driven to win the entire thing, definitely more concern about his chosen hero's 'performance', if you catch my drift. I don't particularly like him for the demeaning actions he dished to Elise, but it match with his background and current state of mind, I'll give you that. And what I like about Elise is her believable, logical reaction to the happenings around. She wasn't an avid WN reader or RPG lovers who expect a reincarnation and casual 'you are the chosen one' situation. Hence why the need to scream and run as her initial instinct. Kudos to you. Hopefully, you don't rush things and keep th character developments to happen slow. Keep up the good works, author :D
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finally! someone write a believable reaction! T.T
"That's not possible!" Elise shouted back and was on the verge of tears. She kept trying to tie the rope around her pants. However, because she was too nervous, the job felt like a super formidable task. "I can't possibly fight such a monster!" - Aliast1yrCommented
bold of u to assume
"I-is this an afterlife? Am I dead?" The man, probably around 25 years old, adjusted his glasses, then looked at me. I felt uncomfortable as soon as he gave a creepy smile. "Are you a god? Will I be reincarnated into another world?" - Aliast1yrReplied to cuttie_Mickey1968Ch 27 Love at First Sight
- Aliast1yrReplied to DaoistFyLMG5Ch 1 For the First Time